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poppetje3D
12-04-2008, 11:07 AM
After i saw avatar i thought , Hey! I can do that!
Yea well here it is!
http://i33.tinypic.com/14sdqc1.jpg
http://i33.tinypic.com/14sdqc1.jpg

edit:
23-dec-08
http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/uploads/496456EarthBending(edit).gif
http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/uploads/496456EarthBending(edit).gif

Gimme Sum Good C&C

zawmbee
12-04-2008, 11:13 AM
Landing was really stiff especially the legs, the particles were really lazy, there was no physics, etc.

Saha
12-04-2008, 11:25 AM
Tje landing wasn't eased very well. He should've fell faster though.

Yeah, particles were lazy.

smish
12-04-2008, 01:37 PM
Kinda the same as all the others, but I think the particals wernet that lazy.

poppetje3D
12-04-2008, 03:03 PM
Kinda the same as all the others, but I think the particals wernet that lazy.
all the others?

dawG
12-04-2008, 03:55 PM
It was too stiff mate.

Sargent-Pocoyo
12-04-2008, 10:22 PM
looks pretty good just dont like how he landed

megaanims
12-05-2008, 01:04 AM
wow cool but same as others legs=stiff

billster-knight
12-05-2008, 04:05 AM
yeah legs were stiff... but the particles is not that bad

poppetje3D
12-05-2008, 08:16 AM
So it is basically the landing , and the particles...

smish
12-05-2008, 11:10 AM
So it is basically the landing , and the particles...

Yup, work on those =D

poppetje3D
12-06-2008, 02:58 AM
DUdes is got a tablet!
Isnt that awesome!

Blot
12-06-2008, 05:05 AM
Your animations remind me of a young me. You animate like I used to. Whats keeping you back is the rush. Don't rush the animation, take your time and make it epic. Detail your beams, and backgrounds. More importantly make them realistic. Which you obviously must know easing for. So for example on realism, dont make a stick who got a light jab punch go flying. The last thing is that you need to get rid of some slight stiffness, sharpshooter taught me that you can never completely get rid of stiffness.
So the trick is to make it not visible. Make something else non stiff so that the focus isn't on the frozen legs or what not. Anyways, overall not to bad, go over some of the basics again take your time on making an animation. Your around medium - High begginer in my eyes.

-Spitfire


that was directed at me by spitfire, a very talented guy, hu got advice from a very very talented guy

btw u need a lot more easing, the build up was good but it looked as tho u droppd off the effort at the end

poppetje3D
12-06-2008, 10:20 AM
Well hell that was weird! :S

I did not drop off at the end , i liked it but ok...

AsSeenOnTV
12-22-2008, 11:02 AM
if you'd put his back leg back just a little more it would make more sense for the jump to go that direction. good everywhere else.

20 POSTS!

poppetje3D
12-23-2008, 04:51 AM
okay i edited it!

Gyohdon
12-23-2008, 09:52 AM
Make it more exciting.

Btw, I've been away to long, are there any good pivoteers in the section?
Or are you the only one worth it?

Beefy
12-23-2008, 11:09 AM
hes probably the best one. hell, his worst is my best

scarecrow, I LOVE UR SIG MAN. THAT WAS SO AWESOME.

poppetje3D
12-23-2008, 11:32 AM
Ehm idk all the good pivoters.
I don't care actually XD

Masronoai
12-23-2008, 04:03 PM
I liked it. Even if the legs were stiff, it's a good animation.

Kalik911
12-23-2008, 06:20 PM
You do realize... that avatar is not stick figure animation, it is not a simple rock being pulled out of the ground. I'm pretty sure I remember it being a lot more complex, so in all honesty: compared to avatar in "effects", thats not good. [by the way, I may be coming off harsh, but thats because you came off harsh on some kid and left an impression]

poppetje3D
12-24-2008, 05:43 AM
You do realize... that avatar is not stick figure animation, it is not a simple rock being pulled out of the ground. I'm pretty sure I remember it being a lot more complex, so in all honesty: compared to avatar in "effects", thats not good. [by the way, I may be coming off harsh, but thats because you came off harsh on some kid and left an impression]
No , I think you are true.
I know , but i don't like the way they move in avatar.
Its like they wanna poo or something.

That's a good comment u got thar :3

Gyohdon
12-24-2008, 07:27 AM
That's a good comment u got thar :3

No it's not.
Being inspired by something is different than copying something.

So poppetje3D could whatever the **** he wanted, he didn't need to copy anything.


scarecrow, I LOVE UR SIG MAN. THAT WAS SO AWESOME.

It IS scarecrow's sig, just not mine.

Lol

master of sticks
12-31-2008, 12:25 AM
pertty nice try making him hit it and throwing it xD that be more cooler dude

Flood
12-31-2008, 01:32 AM
So it is basically the landing , and the particles...
Pretty much.
But the rest was good.