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RawGreen
12-04-2008, 12:02 PM
Mind you that she's not naked, she's basically just in a sketch form. This is may 5th(maybe my 6th) try at FB, I think I did pretty good. I do want C&C on the beam too.

I got encouraged by puinkey :D

http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=177175

Direct link(I prefer you don't watch it full screen):
http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/uploads/177175yetanothertry.swf

Fps: 25
time to make: 3 hours

lol, I need your C&C

Mesmay
12-04-2008, 01:23 PM
the first half (before the beam) was very good, i was quite surprised actually.
It got worse though, it became all awkward and unnatural- im sure you know the place where it was strange, but thats the part you need to correct.
The beam somehow went perfectly horizontally, despite the way she was aiming and also her position, which didnt work for me.

Keep making them.

RawGreen
12-04-2008, 01:53 PM
the first half (before the beam) was very good, i was quite surprised actually.
It got worse though, it became all awkward and unnatural- im sure you know the place where it was strange, but thats the part you need to correct.
The beam somehow went perfectly horizontally, despite the way she was aiming and also her position, which didnt work for me.

Keep making them.

I got to the point of thinking that I should add on, despite how lazy I was feeling about making it. Basically, it was just to be a punch and duck.

The beam itself I thought was neat how I managed to get it to fade. I'll keep at it.

Tawnik
12-04-2008, 02:13 PM
I like it but there isnt any force for the beam..
keep practicing you are getting better :)

kinto
12-04-2008, 03:53 PM
I SAW BUBIEZ



Seriously though, some proportions are screwy. Just keep it more consistent.

RawGreen
12-04-2008, 04:17 PM
Seriously though, some proportions are screwy. Just keep it more consistent.

right, I'm learning that ;p

Upps
12-04-2008, 04:21 PM
Yep, I saw little tight boobs that look fake, cause they don't jiggle :\.
Also, add more frames, I know your lazy but the more you do, the more experience and the more you get used to it..I know you know that :p

RawGreen
12-04-2008, 04:41 PM
Yep, I saw little tight boobs that look fake, cause they don't jiggle :\.
Also, add more frames, I know your lazy but the more you do, the more experience and the more you get used to it..I know you know that :p

*ahem*

I said a sketch like form. picture a body covered with tight latex, ok?