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Lixu
12-06-2008, 06:16 AM
http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=356329

SAP2

Scarecrow
12-06-2008, 06:18 AM
The smoke is great, but I noticed you skimped out on animating it dissipate...

Great work for speed animation though.

Lixu
12-06-2008, 06:21 AM
Took me 15 minutes. Well, actually 20 minutes but I chatted for a bit, and my mom needed me downstairs so.... NOBODY CARES LIXU GTFO

Ssjbryando
12-06-2008, 06:27 AM
For 20 minutes it was ok. I don't like it so much, seeing as you look at the ends of the explosion it changes all the time, while the smoke only rises slighty. I also don't like the smoke suddenly stopping, then continuing as the light flash went by.


The dissolving of the bright light was also wobbly [Movy like]
The white light wasen't really re-drawn [Tweened or re-sized] but its a speed practice so cool =]

Wasen't bad though,

New Generation
12-06-2008, 06:35 AM
I really liked the beginning but then it looked like shit, mainly because it didn't dissipate properly and the white thing was not particle stimulated enough. I thought the overall explosion was a bit too scribbled but a good try for speed animating.

Lixu
12-06-2008, 06:52 AM
Hey, your back.

Thanks for the critics.

RawGreen
12-06-2008, 07:48 AM
very good .

Lixu
12-06-2008, 08:51 AM
thank you .

projectzeta
12-06-2008, 09:35 AM
I liked it a lot, but the second flash annoyed me.

Kensei
12-06-2008, 10:22 AM
Looks alot like a explosion I used in my anime collab anim :c... Im sure thats just a coincidence.

I liked the gradient circle effect but the rest was kinda slopyy :/.

But keep it up good to see you animating alot.

SSJB seriously hurry up with the Anime collab >:c

Arch-Angel
12-06-2008, 10:30 AM
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Very bad.
The explosion needs to actually be animated FBF.

Lixu
12-06-2008, 01:14 PM
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Very bad.
The explosion needs to actually be animated FBF.
I don't need your critics anymore, and the explosion is animated fbf.