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poppetje3D
12-06-2008, 12:19 PM
Hellozzz.

Maby sum people know me of the pivot section...
Anyway i Got like drift a tablet 2! :P
And i got flash 2 years now i never did something with it...
So here my first animation made with a tablet.
Dont aspect much... :S

http://img508.imageshack.us/my.php?image=mehfirstanimationvy3.swf

Give me some tips please...

I made One animation more.
IS this one bettar?
http://www.swfme.com/view/1299462

projectzeta
12-06-2008, 12:32 PM
Hm!

Nice anticipation, actually. I'm guessing that you learned that while using pivot.

For criticism, watch the wobbliness, take it smoothly to work that out. Also, work on them particle effects.

poppetje3D
12-06-2008, 12:33 PM
Ya , i dunno how i Can make the lines smoother...

dawG
12-06-2008, 03:03 PM
I can hop, I can run, and it's very very fun.

thedemonata
12-06-2008, 03:09 PM
I like the kick at the end with the blue under the leg..

And it is very smooth..

poppetje3D
12-06-2008, 03:31 PM
But i still need to post at the beginners section? right?

Request
12-06-2008, 04:47 PM
The movements were off, up the smoothing on your brush, its on the bottom properties section.

The effects were blah, and the easing was bad, work on that aswell.

Haze
12-06-2008, 05:11 PM
Well, I can say that my first anim was terrible compared to yours.

But that's cause I started off with line, I guess.

tl;dr - not bad.

poppetje3D
12-07-2008, 03:54 AM
I added 1 animation more...
Is that one better?