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jonnywonny333
12-08-2008, 04:11 PM
hey, i have made my first actually good full body :D i know thsi looks like crap but ill compare it to the old one.

The Good One (new):http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/uploads/329388goodFB.gif



The Bad ONE (old):http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/uploads/821161FB.gif

CnC please

NOTE: yes i am aware that these are choppy very wobbly and un-eased just try to leave that out and look at the good points eacuse uhm..i know about the bad...

the darkest white
12-08-2008, 04:23 PM
Id say increase the frame rate a bit. Also you need to work on your trails/motion blur. For instance the gun had no blur as it went past his body. Also it spreads to far up his arm. The base of the arm (near his shoulder) should really have no blur, but gradually add more as you move down the arm. In other words, the faster it moves the more blur it should have.
Add me on msn and I can help you out if you like.

japanstickninja
12-08-2008, 04:24 PM
They are pretty good.
I have started easytoon also.
I'm not very good thought.

jonnywonny333
12-08-2008, 04:28 PM
Id say increase the frame rate a bit. Also you need to work on your trails/motion blur. For instance the gun had no blur as it went past his body. Also it spreads to far up his arm. The base of the arm (near his shoulder) should really have no blur, but gradually add more as you move down the arm. In other words, the faster it moves the more blur it should have.
Add me on msn and I can help you out if you like.

i will add you and thanks i'll try fix that about the blur.
now about the frame rate i usally work at 8..i know a little slow..what would you prefer as a frame rate?

leo4life
12-08-2008, 04:35 PM
the frame rate seems perfect to me, ya its a decent fb but like, i cant give u much crit because its too short, try making on that is atleast 5 secs long instead of 0.84

the darkest white
12-08-2008, 04:59 PM
I usually use 7, sometimes 6.

jonnywonny333
12-08-2008, 06:18 PM
kay ill try animating sumthing with that frame rate :)

puinkey
12-08-2008, 08:18 PM
maybe try the no faces type of fullbody first :)
they are good practice

kinto
12-08-2008, 08:19 PM
Its too bad they weren't good.

Vincent
12-08-2008, 08:21 PM
Resizing .