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poppetje3D
12-10-2008, 12:18 PM
Am I? O_o

http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=494055

C&C please :3

jomax
12-10-2008, 01:27 PM
Too wobbly and a lot of resizing. Also put more easing in it. Plus the background is kinda lazy drawn :/ but I guess thats not what you focused on.

And that gray trail, you need to turn down the alpha for it to look good. And yeah you're improving

Frost
12-10-2008, 04:52 PM
yes your getting better. that was much better than your beam. and what jomax said

poppetje3D
12-11-2008, 12:56 PM
Too wobbly and a lot of resizing. Also put more easing in it. Plus the background is kinda lazy drawn :/ but I guess thats not what you focused on.

And that gray trail, you need to turn down the alpha for it to look good. And yeah you're improving

Ya i did not focus on the background.
But how was the landing of the jump?

RawGreen
12-11-2008, 01:27 PM
Ya i did not focus on the background.
But how was the landing of the jump?

soso, wobbly, this is where the resizing kicks in..

you have improv3d