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jomax
12-13-2008, 08:28 AM
http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=981182

Yay finally. Sorry for not having the authentic sound in the end, just couldn't find it. Thanks to you guys who've helped me. And btw it says Majoh cause thats me on brokensource community.

So C&C please

Forgot to say, thanks to Cocio also for telling me continue on this and giving C&C

dawG
12-13-2008, 08:50 AM
The end was kinda epic.
But **** dude, it's brilliant.
GREAT WORK!

jomax
12-13-2008, 08:56 AM
Thank you sir, what a generous comment :D

dawG
12-13-2008, 09:34 AM
Your welcome my good friend!

M3D
12-13-2008, 09:34 AM
Finally.
Yeah like I said in Pm's, people will love it.
Didn't expect that at the end though but meh =p

projectzeta
12-13-2008, 10:17 AM
Very cool. The credits were obviously mixed up, but the animation was good.

I liked it a lot.

RawGreen
12-13-2008, 10:48 AM
that's messed up :

grt j

دo

dawG
12-13-2008, 12:45 PM
Rawgreen shut up, if you don't have anything to say.

Raffi
12-13-2008, 01:04 PM
It's alright, but the fighting didn't last very long, and the ending was bleh.

Raffi
12-13-2008, 01:05 PM
It's alright, but the fighting didn't last very long, and the ending was bleh.

Mesmay
12-13-2008, 01:16 PM
No, you absoloutely ruined that with that ending.
You shouldnt end it like that, it doesnt fit.

Please change it. I really liked most of the rest of it..

Aycaramba
12-13-2008, 03:15 PM
It was awesome.
This - shoop + 2 weeks = on stickpages frontpage
You just inspired me.

jomax
12-13-2008, 03:22 PM
Thank you guys for the generous comments.

@ Mesmay, yeah the shoop was just a way to end it. Was really bored and wanted to move on to new projects.

@Projectzeta, Indeed the credits part sucked but it was not really what i focused on ;)

My next animation will be alot better and without lazy endings ;) I promise, it's already about 800 frames of sketches.

Again, thanks

Ssjbryando
12-13-2008, 05:16 PM
No, you absoloutely ruined that with that ending.
You shouldnt end it like that, it doesnt fit.

Please change it. I really liked most of the rest of it..

I actually thought it fit : P It was a serious like moment I know, but still. I don't find it that misplaced, I actually loled.

I loved it man. It was laggin a bit here >_> but yea, fullbody, nice.

Socks
12-13-2008, 05:23 PM
i first noticed the lousy character models, work on picking out more realistic colours, and work on your shading.
the movments were good, but not great.
the ending caught me off guard and it made me smirk, which is a good thing.
it was a great effort and well done.

billster-knight
12-13-2008, 05:28 PM
yaaay shoop da whoop :D i love it very cool

NinjasRule34
12-14-2008, 05:45 PM
pretty cool. Better than what i would have created. Keep it up and stick to the longer animations :)

Hyun
12-14-2008, 07:21 PM
MY GOODNESS!!! That's the first Shoop that got be 100% off guard!
Really nice fullbody style man and the movements were actually really decent! Can't wait to see more from you

Bonk
12-14-2008, 08:21 PM
Nice fullbody.

The start, where blue was practicing, was really well animated. Unfortunately the fighting let you down, but with a few more frames and easing it could be really great.

The ending was random, unexpected, and I chuckled, so well done.