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brunoob
12-23-2008, 11:06 AM
i was fuucking mading a animation, then the ****ING flash crashed GRRR....
but, i find a swf, so i will post it...
http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=827756CC please

jomax
12-23-2008, 11:08 AM
Speed lines looked bad, no heads and why is this called The Chosen?

Good smoke tho, finish it :3

Sunder Forge
12-23-2008, 11:44 AM
I should be capitalized, for the indication of the start of a sentence. "Mading" is the past tense of "Making" since you should of had making, you also should of put "an" instead of "a". Good try.


Animation needs work.... lots of work

poppetje3D
12-23-2008, 12:00 PM
Why is no body using heads anymoar?!
YOU NEED A HEAD TO LIVE.

brunoob
12-23-2008, 12:46 PM
I should be capitalized, for the indication of the start of a sentence. "Mading" is the past tense of "Making" since you should of had making, you also should of put "an" instead of "a". Good try.


Animation needs work.... lots of work


sorry bro, but i am brazilian, and i'm very bad at english...

poppetje, i'm did not used head bcause the flash crashed...
i put the head everytime later...

dawG
12-23-2008, 01:11 PM
Well idk it was confusing?

I can't say if you gotten any better, but it was okay.

M3D
12-23-2008, 05:44 PM
I like the spacing style.
Fix the stiffness.