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zans
12-25-2008, 01:52 PM
hey, i've been practicing, but could i get tips on improving instead of just strait critisism plz?

http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=317102


http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=519546

http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=689614

http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=444469

proslayar
12-25-2008, 02:01 PM
that looks really cool, i cant give advice cause im a noob but it looks really cool, espically the last three. O, and what FPS do you use?

zans
12-25-2008, 02:05 PM
thanks, and 24FPS the only fps thats not to slow and not to fast XD

T Man
12-25-2008, 02:07 PM
Oh woah, it's like a mix of Mraznbuddy andddd strifers :)!

brilliant combo srsly, the style really sticks to me!

You need to work on fluidity.. movements can be eased more etc. but yeah keep up the style yo.

colby
12-25-2008, 08:30 PM
looks really good, well i think