View Full Version : Short step :P [EM]

12-26-2008, 01:13 PM
I was bored, so I made this: http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=721235

Cumment... And stuff.

12-26-2008, 02:46 PM
Well lol. I would suggest watching tuts, and other swfs and practice practice without showing something that fast.

Its weird. His body is just, weird. HIs legs are too long for my opinion (but its an opinion and choice, so I can't really crit on that)

He resizes a lot, and his arms are choppy/wobbly. The step was ok I guess. But again, the giant legs make it look very ugly.
His leg also bends very unnatural. If I would be that guy, I would be in fcking pain <:

Keep up the practice though.

12-27-2008, 02:16 AM
Thanks, man :) I'll try and improve.

12-27-2008, 04:14 AM
I don't think that huge backup force was needed for a short step lol. There was an incy bit of resizing. Also if you don't want to suddenly give up when animating the stick, I suggest draw a good BG aswell, it might tell you not to stop... or something like that :P. Anyway, good work and keep practicing! Make longer animations and add better sounds next time, lol. Only because I found them a little different than... to be.

12-27-2008, 05:51 AM
Thanks, Aklemo. :)