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Tawnik
03-17-2008, 01:54 PM
Yes yes yes :]

http://flost.shiftlimits.com/view/OIFHT4av-tZq

C & C please

12 FPS

Ssjbryando
03-17-2008, 02:18 PM
It was good, only you could have eased the end a bit more (The last kick) cause it looked so. Boom and stopped right away, and the first elbow, the lines where weird.

Shanto
03-17-2008, 02:20 PM
I think your getting rusty Tawnik!

That last kick was VERY choppy D:

mitsukai
03-17-2008, 02:58 PM
the last kick WAS rusty but it was still good, i see you tried to make it look fast. That why you added so little frames to it? (thats what i do, thats why i asked.)

also the frist punch should not have just dropped how it did. In a jab you quickly bring your hand back after the punch. so the turning would have probably started with the arm already in.

Nice uppercutt.

Tawnik
03-17-2008, 03:32 PM
What does it mean rusty ??

Ty :)

mitsukai
03-17-2008, 04:45 PM
lol sorry meant choppy..

Epic
03-17-2008, 04:54 PM
looks more undone to me rather then choppy. just finnish up the kick, and your good.

the afro ninja
03-17-2008, 04:59 PM
wow i like the sketchy style a lot but the last kick had to have been like 4 frames??? idk

T Man
03-17-2008, 07:34 PM
I don't think that this style fits with fighting movies. srsly

Tawnik
03-18-2008, 02:24 PM
I know it Tman,but I just tried it :]

The end is choppy right ?