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Dead-Shot
03-17-2008, 03:56 PM
These are the only animations ive made so far, and also, they are my first.
I really want some info on how i did so i can know what i can do to improve :D

So... links...

Running - http://www.*************/open/1205785280
Punching - http://www.*************/open/1205784748
Teleportation - http://www.*************/open/1205785344
Avitar - http://www.*************/open/1205785736

So what do you all think?

Edit - Avitar link fixed.

Request
03-17-2008, 04:01 PM
Well they weren't the worst that I have ever seen.

The running was alright just that his legs got to small when they were unders his body, and the movements were a little off.

The punching wouldn't be that bad, if there was some easing, just add easing and make sure it doesn't resize.

The teleportation was my favorite, it was pretty good, just work on your particles and movements again.

Keep at it and you will be there.

Dead-Shot
03-17-2008, 04:04 PM
Well they weren't the worst that I have ever seen.

The running was alright just that his legs got to small when they were unders his body, and the movements were a little off.

The punching wouldn't be that bad, if there was some easing, just add easing and make sure it doesn't resize.

The teleportation was my favorite, it was pretty good, just work on your particles and movements again.

Keep at it and you will be there.

Ok, cool, and thanks!

Lag
03-17-2008, 04:09 PM
If those are your firsts, they are great. Listen to Beatbox, and you'll grow fast in skill.

kinto
03-17-2008, 04:28 PM
If those are your firsts, they are great. Listen to Beatbox, and you'll grow fast in skill.

He might grow in other things too :D.


Just kidding.
It was good so far but try to no resize the stick so much and when he runs, have the figure run and not just have the legs pivot around him.

Shanto
03-17-2008, 04:30 PM
Wow, those are REALLY good for firsts. Pretty smooth, and basic easing.

Keep it up, man, I think you'll be good, soon.

Dead-Shot
03-17-2008, 04:32 PM
He might grow in other things too :D.


Just kidding.
It was good so far but try to no resize the stick so much and when he runs, have the figure run and not just have the legs pivot around him.

Noted :D Thanks

ck2100
03-17-2008, 04:41 PM
Those are nice for your first animations!

supranova
03-18-2008, 05:32 PM
Nice job, way better then my first,
Other than that strange grey line on the punch they all look good.

alive
03-18-2008, 06:17 PM
Grids and/or a guiding layer is very helpful to prevent resizing. You are on your way, nice work.

Spazmodan
03-18-2008, 06:29 PM
Nice work. The running was a bit sloppy but the teleportation was great. It was basic, but wasn't bad. The punching wasn't all that bad either. Good work for your first animations.