View Full Version : First, feature length.

03-17-2008, 05:02 PM
I was bored.


its like my third flash in the history of the world.

so be kind

03-17-2008, 05:11 PM
That was Amazing.

03-17-2008, 05:16 PM
I need some critique, and when i say first, i mean the first one im proud of.

03-17-2008, 05:26 PM
work on movements, dont make her skip around like that.

thats all the video had in it.

03-17-2008, 05:30 PM
the movements of the person were not good, but the background of the 'new city' looked really cool

oh...and it was weird...not necssarily(sp?) a bad thing...just making an observation

i thought it was alright though, could use some dull, strange music to add to the weird atmosphere...

the afro ninja
03-17-2008, 05:30 PM
that was . . . blah. . . do what darkness said

03-17-2008, 10:11 PM
Well I like the style, but you actually need to animate it. Everything was off and the short cuts you used looked horrible. But the walking at the beginning actually looked good and I liked the eye thing. The water was decent though choppy.

You just need to take more time on it and make every frame animated and try to avoid shortcuts just for the sake of length.

03-18-2008, 03:04 PM
well its not like I tried :3

03-19-2008, 03:51 PM
all of u can shut up!!