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Vervanda
03-17-2008, 05:02 PM
I was bored.

http://antiup.net/view.php?id=20918973621City%20Life.swf


its like my third flash in the history of the world.

so be kind

Request
03-17-2008, 05:11 PM
That was Amazing.

Vervanda
03-17-2008, 05:16 PM
I need some critique, and when i say first, i mean the first one im proud of.

Request
03-17-2008, 05:26 PM
work on movements, dont make her skip around like that.

thats all the video had in it.

fitzy
03-17-2008, 05:30 PM
the movements of the person were not good, but the background of the 'new city' looked really cool

oh...and it was weird...not necssarily(sp?) a bad thing...just making an observation

i thought it was alright though, could use some dull, strange music to add to the weird atmosphere...

the afro ninja
03-17-2008, 05:30 PM
that was . . . blah. . . do what darkness said

Schwa
03-17-2008, 10:11 PM
Well I like the style, but you actually need to animate it. Everything was off and the short cuts you used looked horrible. But the walking at the beginning actually looked good and I liked the eye thing. The water was decent though choppy.

You just need to take more time on it and make every frame animated and try to avoid shortcuts just for the sake of length.

Vervanda
03-18-2008, 03:04 PM
well its not like I tried :3

Vervanda
03-19-2008, 03:51 PM
all of u can shut up!!