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denuchi1
12-31-2008, 10:24 PM
Im new to stickpage and forums all together so im not sure whether i should be in the begginer thread or not. Just some of my animations, please comment and give constructive criticism.

http://i262.photobucket.com/albums/ii82/dnodenuchi/weapons.gif
This one isn't complete, i know the smoke(or smoke idk) effect is horrible

http://i262.photobucket.com/albums/ii82/dnodenuchi/beamcombat.gif
one of my best and fastest animations

http://i262.photobucket.com/albums/ii82/dnodenuchi/closecombat.gif
i made this one to pwn my friend

http://i262.photobucket.com/albums/ii82/dnodenuchi/run-1.gif
Made this one for fun and it was a background text(i know the running sucks)

stare
01-01-2009, 01:19 PM
I thought that they were pretty good, you need some work though.

I liked the style your using, it's interesting.
Your sticks were way to stiff, add some easing to them.

Hmmmm, I'd say post a few times in the beginner's section,
so you can get some more C&C.

denuchi1
01-02-2009, 02:30 PM
Thanks man, but what do you mean by stiff? they dont move enough?

stare
01-02-2009, 06:52 PM
Stiff as in, not enough bending of limbs, just add more frames of movement.

leobara
01-03-2009, 03:03 PM
It's cool,but like said earlier sticks are a little stiff

Socks
01-03-2009, 03:28 PM
O man! Your god awful, you animations hurt my eyes! Go die in a whole noob!
Is all it would say I said if you didnt highlight this part of my message. Like previously stated the sticks are stiff and their joints arent moving very much. However I do like what your doing, it makes your animations look hectic and intense, but a bit too much because everything is pretty much the same colour. Keep up the good work and you wont have to post in the beginners section anymore :D

Hunter.t.w.e
01-03-2009, 05:24 PM
Hmm....you are better than a begginer...

interesting style

matt_the_brat
01-03-2009, 07:28 PM
lol your animations remind me of geometry class with all the triangles, squares circles, etc. but ya a little less stiffness and i like your style, better than beginner

marcuswargo
01-18-2009, 05:32 PM
they're much better than mine.
have you ever heard of Bert?
he does pivot, and it looks like his style.

manatthedesk
01-22-2009, 05:35 PM
I wudnt sauy that looks like bert. But what do I no? Anyway I love the fast pacedness they have, like said above just add in a few more frames of movent. But ur pretty good, I reckon not beginner.

shinelt
02-04-2009, 11:14 AM
not beginner... but..one thing is hard for you... walking/running

denuchi1
02-04-2009, 05:27 PM
not beginner... but..one thing is hard for you... walking/running
yeah my runnning is horrible

Tommysenf
02-05-2009, 01:33 PM
that vids are amazing.. i can't do it better..!!

Fazz-
02-05-2009, 02:56 PM
that vids are amazing.. i can't do it better..!!
are you some sort of master of easytoon or something? but yeah, denuchi1 you been working on any more?

denuchi1
02-05-2009, 07:34 PM
are you some sort of master of easytoon or something? but yeah, denuchi1 you been working on any more?

yeah i am, and i actually started a new thread(this wasnt doing good before)
its called project theta(Deadzone)...its a continuation of the first animation on here

thanks everyone for the compliments!

Avian
02-06-2009, 05:42 AM
not bad, but very fast, i didn't notice some events
beginners section

TheGautham911111
02-06-2009, 03:14 PM
http://untitledI am new.Look how I did.

TheGautham911111
02-06-2009, 03:16 PM
Not working.NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!1:Nooooooo: :Nooooooo: :Nooooooo: :Cry: :Cry: :Cry: :Oh No!: :Oh No!: :Oh No!: :Sweating: :Sweating: :Sweating:

Crazedupfilms
02-24-2009, 04:21 PM
I think you belong in the intermediate not quite pro but your close

Crazedupfilms
02-24-2009, 04:23 PM
People are mean in the pivot section becuase like pivot characters bodies those peoples balls are stiff and dont bend so there crotch gets stuck in there zippers

denuchi1
02-25-2009, 02:55 PM
I think you belong in the intermediate not quite pro but your close
thanks, thats what i was going for


People are mean in the pivot section becuase like pivot characters bodies those peoples balls are stiff and dont bend so there crotch gets stuck in there zippers
lol

marcuswargo
03-01-2009, 01:34 PM
I noticed the smoke effect in the top one, I like it.
Very cartoon-Like.

MaxZ
03-01-2009, 03:00 PM
Since everyone is bumping :|

Work on particles and running. do you use the line tool?

Don't listen to the guy who talks about piv sticks and balls falling off, you have a long way to go till pro.

Noah4104
03-01-2009, 03:16 PM
LOL thats funny as heck.

denuchi1
03-01-2009, 03:46 PM
I noticed the smoke effect in the top one, I like it.
Very cartoon-Like.
Thanks!

Since everyone is bumping :|

Work on particles and running. do you use the line tool?

Don't listen to the guy who talks about piv sticks and balls falling off, you have a long way to go till pro.
Lol thanks for the honesty, and i know my running is disgusting lol. I use the line tool for speed lines, weapons and the background, but thats about it.

live2wrestle
03-01-2009, 06:56 PM
i would say you are intermediate

denuchi1
03-01-2009, 07:02 PM
i would say you are intermediate
thanks!...check my other thread(project theta) if u get the chance and tell me what you think...