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sasuke21
01-06-2009, 01:16 PM
heres one of my first videos

backflip with hand

tell me what you think.
criticism is welcome!

poppetje3D
01-06-2009, 01:24 PM
M'kay.
U pwn man!
I LOVE U :D

sasuke21
01-06-2009, 01:26 PM
whoa thanks:Smile:

Lemon
01-06-2009, 01:41 PM
Begginers section please. The animation was very stiff and I didn't like the stick at all. Nice try though and keep practising

zwolfsburg
01-06-2009, 02:12 PM
You animate as good as I do know, well, with pivot. To give you an idea of how good that is, it's High-beginner level. But just make sure that you don't accidentally move something unwanted during the animating process, Cause I saw the leg twitch.

sasuke21
01-06-2009, 02:25 PM
Well thanks for all the criticism i will put it to
good use:Happy:

Vorpal
01-06-2009, 09:02 PM
You animate as good as I do know, well, with pivot. To give you an idea of how good that is, it's High-beginner level. But just make sure that you don't accidentally move something unwanted during the animating process, Cause I saw the leg twitch.

No it was not, it was low beginner to be honest. The were no physics or easing to be seen, along with stiffness. However I will give him props for attempting the ever so challenging back flip. Just look in the tutorial section powerfuse0 made a fairly kickass tutorial on how to do a back flip.

billster-knight
01-07-2009, 12:04 AM
I agree with Necrotic mannequin

Vorpal
01-07-2009, 01:21 AM
I agree with Necrotic mannequin

Indeed,many people do.
Also I recommend learning to make a stick figure run and walk long before you attempt flips. Because not only do you have to figure out a certain way to ease and space but you then have to perfect a landing as to were running and walking are a few simple motions.

Avian
01-07-2009, 02:35 AM
stiff, bad easing, ... - LOW BEGINNER, and the "camera move" is choppy
so, you should post this into beg section

sasuke21
01-07-2009, 11:55 AM
i will try too make it better next time.

Vorpal
01-07-2009, 02:22 PM
well it was my first try though.

Stop right there, never, EVER use excuses. Ever, just be like "Thanks I will have to try that" or " I will do better next time" excuses are the first path to failure.

Foda
01-07-2009, 05:16 PM
um the back flip when his hands touched the ground they slid

te6
01-08-2009, 04:04 AM
No it was not, it was low beginner to be honest. The were no physics or easing to be seen, along with stiffness. However I will give him props for attempting the ever so challenging back flip. Just look in the tutorial section powerfuse0 made a fairly kickass tutorial on how to do a back flip.

do u always use super lituratic english?

Vorpal
01-08-2009, 12:31 PM
do u always use super lituratic english?

Even if I do, I am still yet to comprehend and reach the epiphany of what that has to do with any relevance, or the animation itself. And assuming it does not, it still has completely nothing to do with the animation. Not that I care.

There really was no movements, however I think one of your flaws is positioning and bad sticks.

sasuke21
01-08-2009, 12:52 PM
Well the reason i am animating with pivot is that im am going to get flash,
so i want to learn animating first.
the feedback was appreciated.
i will improve until next time

Zatrael "J" Noir
01-08-2009, 12:58 PM
Begginers.
Stiff and needs to look more realistic.

Vorpal
01-08-2009, 01:13 PM
Begginers.
Stiff and needs to look more realistic.

Who are you, jet? One post and already speaking like your multi accounting.

poppetje3D
01-09-2009, 10:09 AM
I Still love U :D

Kaas
01-09-2009, 10:51 AM
Even if I do, I am still yet to comprehend and reach the epiphany of what that has to do with any relevance, or the animation itself. And assuming it does not, it still has completely nothing to do with the animation. Not that I care.

There really was no movements, however I think one of your flaws is positioning and bad sticks.
"has to do with any relevance"?
Try "how that was relevant" or "either it is relevant"....


Anyhow, don't do drugs and stay in school...

Avian
01-09-2009, 11:11 AM
Well the reason i am animating with pivot is that im am going to get flash,
so i want to learn animating first.
the feedback was appreciated.
i will improve until next time
i think animating in flash is a waste, beacuse you have to buy it

Kaas
01-09-2009, 11:18 AM
i think animating in flash is a waste, beacuse you have to buy it

You sir, are a disgrace to everything good in the world...