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Tawnik
01-07-2009, 05:26 AM
http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=436979

The "wall jump" is just preparing for the aerial kick, but someone may think I broke the combo with it, what is your opinion ?? Please do tell me !!!

No, its not finished.Yes, Im going to finish it.

Bonk
01-07-2009, 05:29 AM
That's badass, but if you should've just pm'd it to mesmay.

Love the style and angles and shit. Grrr I'll have to top it.

jomax
01-07-2009, 05:36 AM
Hmm imo all the angles made it hard to see what was going on, it was cool tho, i lol'd :]

Aycaramba
01-07-2009, 06:30 AM
I can clearly see what's going on, this is awesome!

Slayer
01-07-2009, 06:58 AM
Heh, I liked the multiple angles, that's certainly one of the key steps to becoming a great animator.

RawGreen
01-07-2009, 08:25 AM
the different thickness in his arms bothers me.

I love the animation and the reaction to the rape part, lol.

Tawnik
01-07-2009, 09:16 AM
Thank you :3 Im so glad you like it :D but no, tell me if the wall thing breaks the combo :D

Aycaramba
01-07-2009, 09:48 AM
No, I don't think the wall thing breaks the combo.
Also, do you think it's too late for me to join?

MoD
01-07-2009, 09:52 AM
Some of the angles really ****ed up the flow of the thing and it all seems to claustrophobic, fix that now

Tawnik
01-07-2009, 10:22 AM
Heh, I liked the multiple angles, that's certainly one of the key steps to becoming a great animator.


That's badass, but if you should've just pm'd it to mesmay.

Love the style and angles and shit. Grrr I'll have to top it.



I can clearly see what's going on, this is awesome!


Hmm imo all the angles made it hard to see what was going on, it was cool tho, i lol'd :]



Some of the angles really ****ed up the flow of the thing and it all seems to claustrophobic, fix that now


3:2 good:wrong angles

Im not going to fix it, I like it the ways its done.Im sorry if you had any problems while watching it.Its the first time Im using that much angles/views.



No, Aycaramba, you can still join :)

M3D
01-07-2009, 12:01 PM
MOD doesn't know what hes talking about.
He just wants my name >=[

LOVELY ANGLES.
And the combo just scraped a combo =]

Drifts
01-07-2009, 01:44 PM
I think the angles were killer awesome, it looks like it came out a 3D movie.

Tentionmaru
01-07-2009, 03:55 PM
the combo doesn't seem broken, but i'm finding it hard to really tell wtf is going on at most times, due to so damn much angle switching.

Foda
01-07-2009, 05:02 PM
i think it's nice weird that you add the rape thing but still good also like the angles

Slayer
01-07-2009, 05:19 PM
Lol, you think it's nice that he added rape?

Perhaps you should see a psychiatrist.

Sunder Forge
01-07-2009, 09:45 PM
Kinda lacked force, and easing. Bg was crazy simple, if you use that many low detail backgrounds, it gets repetitive. Close up should have thickerlines imo. Quite enjoyable though

BluGil
01-07-2009, 09:49 PM
hhhhuh. i think your anims, i have to say, are getting slightly worse :/

its gettin kinda sloppy and cutsy, by which i mean, cutting around sporadically from scene to scene witihout making sense. and also, have u heard of perspective? its where objects dont look like theyre in a cubism painting.

kinto
01-07-2009, 10:01 PM
You have developed a great style.

Tawnik
01-08-2009, 09:22 AM
Oh my ****ing god.
So..

I'm good animator,but without any skills.
My bgs are awesome, but they're lacking details and perspective is wrong.
Combo wasnt broken, but the rape part was off ?

There's only one link, idk how can your comments be SO different.

Malskaer
01-08-2009, 10:06 AM
Oh that was great.

Sunder Forge
01-08-2009, 04:38 PM
Oh my ****ing god.
So..

There's only one link, idk how can your comments be SO different.
We are different people, we have different oppinions.