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sth93888
01-09-2009, 03:49 PM
http://truimagz.com/hosting/sth93888/Private/sword%20fight.swf

ok, i see some bad parts in it, i forgot to make the walls while i was makin it, so when the knife stops in midair realize there is supposed to be a wall there.

the running looks terrible, im gonna c if i can fix that in my next one

and i realize that i used a tween when he turned around and it looks terrible. im not goin to go back and fix it now, but i wont do that again in my next one.
Any other CC would be much appreciated!
o, and it is supposed to be synced up a bit with the music, but it wasnt when i tested it, and it might not be for u

Spazmodan
01-09-2009, 04:25 PM
Needs work on everything really.

BluGil
01-09-2009, 05:29 PM
yeah. good try tho. it looks clean but the animation just sucks. and please... different effin music. ugh christ my ears are gushing blood. so try and slow it all down, basically

jomax
01-09-2009, 05:33 PM
You cant tell him to change the music since thats really just a question of taste. Anway, the animation is bad and needs alot of work, but just check out some tutorials, keep animating and the skill will come eventually. Animating is nothing you learn over a night, keep that in mind.

Chunky
01-09-2009, 05:36 PM
content wise youve got some good fights going on there, just need to improve the actual animating of it.

sth93888
01-09-2009, 08:19 PM
ya thanks i think i kinda rushed it a bit. ok ill do better on the next one

bAsSicksIgHt
01-11-2009, 12:05 PM
i don't thing going to the tutorial section isant ganna help much, cause i see not so helpful tutorials at all. that sucks.

RaGe SaUcE
01-11-2009, 05:36 PM
it needs some work.....