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billster-knight
01-11-2009, 03:27 AM
i posted this in the beginners' thread like last week, but i want pro comments if i improved, so please saha rab and zawmb please tell me what you think


http://i233.photobucket.com/albums/ee217/Billioster/groundbreak.gif

jomax
01-11-2009, 03:37 AM
Making the screen black instead of showing him getting hit by the beam-thingy was very lazy

LN3uq
01-11-2009, 03:41 AM
Everything was too slow. Especially when he bounces off of the ground at the end
the spacing's not very good either

▀ub
01-11-2009, 04:04 AM
less choppiness, more easing, more faster, more better sticks, more attention to physics, less shitty.

zawmbee
01-11-2009, 04:17 AM
Beginner section please, no one told you to come out and that animation doesn't prove you're ready.

It's way too slow, the gravity is really shit, you don't ease in the air.

billster-knight
01-11-2009, 06:40 AM
mannnn okay, i used to post mine in the beginner's thread but i think no pro goes there so i posted outside hehe thanks guys for the comments,
i appreciate it :D i will do better next time ^.^

Randy
01-12-2009, 03:46 AM
fps needs to be higher

Lemon
01-12-2009, 12:10 PM
Choopy and stiff, move every limb ever frame. The stiffness was the worst part about this animation.

poppetje3D
01-12-2009, 12:21 PM
OOH OOH ME! ME!
*puts hand up*
ME! ME ME!

Its stiff and slowww :)
Fx can be better 2 :D

AsSeenOnTV
01-12-2009, 02:53 PM
move the joints more, don't just move the whole thing. work on physics too. instead of making something like this, try making more of a simulation of things that happen instead of following crappy tutorials. Your animations wont look good if you keep doing what you're doing now. change your style.

acrookednose
01-18-2009, 12:44 AM
stiff and uneased, speed up fps