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Shanto
01-15-2009, 10:54 AM
I made an animation again.

It's smooth.

But it's ****ing horrible :C

It resizes, it is wobbly, its just ****ing horrible.
Hence, you must tell me how to improve my problems.

In order for you to specifically see my problems, i will post my animation in this thread.

http://www.swfme.com/view/1263162

Bongoe
01-15-2009, 10:57 AM
Why post something so short. I guess it was ok?

Shanto
01-15-2009, 11:00 AM
Why? Because when I make a long horrible animation I feel like my efforts are wasted.


So I make short tests and post them so people tell me how to improve on the short tests. Once I ace the short tests, I will move on to longer animations.

Kensei
01-15-2009, 11:07 AM
Hmmm I see,

Resizing is easily fixed by using a guideline or grid, (you can make your own guidline by just making a horizontal line above the head and across the whole background so it is touching the top of the head and another line where the waist is, this will help to keep the legs and torso-head the same size.

Wobbliness is basicaly something moving back and forward rappidly just make sure all the body parts are either COMPLETELY still ( are drawnin the exactly same position when stood still ) or slightly moving in ONE direction , use the onion skin to check if its right..

YEah and thats it I guess...

Shanto
01-15-2009, 11:12 AM
Thanks =D

-Hawk-
01-15-2009, 11:27 AM
It's decent imo... for not having animated in a while I suppose. Sorry for not giving detailed criticism.

Shanto
01-15-2009, 11:29 AM
Meh, whatever yo.

Tawnik
01-15-2009, 01:25 PM
Where's snow ???

Its smooth,but its resizing,use two lines, one under the legs and the other above the head.It works.

M3D
01-15-2009, 02:01 PM
Time you made a longer anim?

=]