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Blot
03-19-2008, 04:33 AM
i was gonna call it zero g but decided not to....... anyway here is my animation its not finished not even halfway but i just wanna see how im going and make any changes before i get fully into it......... please rate me

http://uploaded.pivothost.org/Edward0/zeroiikq.piv

or if thats not working
http://i264.photobucket.com/albums/ii184/edwardo0/zero.gif

Scarecrow
03-19-2008, 06:39 AM
The run looks all right, but you need to work on making it smoother.

Also your effects need work.


Keep practising.

leo4life
03-19-2008, 06:47 AM
i dont think u should start a series yet

Blot
03-19-2008, 06:49 AM
thanks did u see any of my other stuff??? and im working on it now even mroe ill post it again in a minute

leo4life
03-19-2008, 06:53 AM
no im not trying ta be mean, but u should look at some mroe test, ur running is ok, but u need ta make it good. ur arms are to small, well, u should use a better stick guy. and those lined when u make him teleport, arent so good, 6/10

Blot
03-19-2008, 06:54 AM
i might not make it a full series.... might just make the one ep then see if i can continue on with it

leo4life
03-19-2008, 06:56 AM
med, but u shouldnt care about rank

Blot
03-19-2008, 06:59 AM
yeh i guess http://i264.photobucket.com/albums/ii184/edwardo0/running.gif thats the running smooth enough?

sss
03-19-2008, 07:02 AM
well the running,is stiff you didint move the backbone,and he jumps up and down in one frame.

Blot
03-19-2008, 07:03 AM
its to hard to move everything but i will work on it

wait y do u move the backbone for running???? on the tut on dark demon it said keep the back bent ???

sss
03-19-2008, 07:10 AM
try running in front of mirror and you will see that you move your back a little

leo4life
03-19-2008, 07:13 AM
yea, ur back doesnt stay perfectly still, almost all ur body has to move, its not that hard, just look at my sig. i did the beggining part in like 45 minutes (first 5 secs of the animation)

Scarecrow
03-19-2008, 08:17 AM
The new run is a lot better, but you need to ease the up and down movement.

Lone Wolf
03-19-2008, 10:28 AM
Unless it's that super fast run with the backbone nearly bent all the way down, you need to move the backbone, or else stiffness occurs. Also, the leg movements are fine, but the arms could use a little work. Ease them more and add a couple frames in that particular movement to make it smoother.

‹berschall
03-19-2008, 10:30 AM
i dont think u should start a series yet

i think ur rong he can mak a series wenever he wants i think its no good animashon but u can get better when making a series a lot lol

Blot
03-19-2008, 06:08 PM
thanks uberschall and i find it hard to move the arms cos there small ill do it with a bigger stick soon

=Rock=
03-19-2008, 07:19 PM
is the series for everyone.. or for your own good/ enjoyment?

wait what a dumb question....

anyway i think it looks fine, actually maybe better than mine.. haven ever really tried making a guy run... ok i thihnk ill go do that right now.

i dont think it matter that it goes up and down in one motion, it looks like things in cartoons. now try making it actually moving across the floor.

the doogler
03-19-2008, 10:07 PM
Hey Edward, can i help you with graphics, ill send you some of my work ive done for other people if you want, i just want to help somebody out cuz im not much of a pivot person yet

pivotfreak747
03-20-2008, 01:23 AM
well that guy is stupid because when you dont move the backbone it looks un real also like leo said do the smaller stuff before you do the bigger stuff:)

Blot
03-20-2008, 02:09 AM
Hey Edward, can i help you with graphics, ill send you some of my work ive done for other people if you want, i just want to help somebody out cuz im not much of a pivot person yet

yeh that would be good and u talking to me pivotfreak??? cos i only followed the tut

the doogler
03-20-2008, 09:50 AM
http://i117.photobucket.com/albums/o47/brettw99/artic_edited-1.png
http://i117.photobucket.com/albums/o47/brettw99/Untitled-2_edited-2.png
http://i117.photobucket.com/albums/o47/brettw99/Untitled-2copy-3.png
http://i117.photobucket.com/albums/o47/brettw99/Untitled-3-2.png
i used to be in this clan on halo 2 thats why theres ksi in all of them

Blot
03-20-2008, 08:56 PM
i still dont see how it helps me

Blot
03-20-2008, 09:00 PM
i dont think it matter that it goes up and down in one motion, it looks like things in cartoons. now try making it actually moving across the floor.

that is stupid because i will have to keep making him run through one side and come out on the other side its better how it is cos i can have him running for as long as i weant with out having to make him appear on the other side when he runs across the floor

the doogler
03-20-2008, 09:05 PM
ok i was just tryin to help

Blot
03-20-2008, 11:26 PM
im just saying i dnt now how that stuff works into pivot

=Rock=
03-20-2008, 11:51 PM
ok, but you still have to practice him ACTUALLY running across something. you cant make him run still for all your anims, right?

and please dont JUST post inside your own thread and expect all people to post in it, please contribute.

(DONT LeeCH)

kirimaru
03-21-2008, 07:43 AM
there was something wrong in the start of running but I can't say directly what. Sorry

John4
03-21-2008, 05:53 PM
Sawesome! Edward is back! W00T! It looks like you might need some help. PM me and I'll try and help if you want. In the meantime, I'm changing my avatar.