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sth93888
01-18-2009, 08:54 PM
CC would b helpful
and please dont just say "it sux" cuz that doesnt help
http://truimagz.com/hosting/sth93888/Private/kicks.swf

herbivore
01-18-2009, 09:05 PM
Hey, thats very good!

Just some things I think would be better:

1) The body seems very stiff, as its bent over in the same fashion for most of the animation. Body bending forward while kicking etc would add more force and make it not as stiff I think.

2) The attacks lack power a bit. Maybe reducing the frames towards the end of an attack helps - thats what I saw in a tut.

Flood
01-18-2009, 09:07 PM
"it sux"


Because I can't even see it.
Can you upload it here:?
http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/index.php

sth93888
01-18-2009, 09:34 PM
http://www.truploader.com/view_upload.php?id=148887
and thanks herbivore

Aycaramba
01-19-2009, 07:08 AM
Try making limbs on the sticks, because they look like spaghetti.
The animation was smooth, but like herbivore said, it lacks force.
It's also a bit wobbly, and work on physics.

Shanto
01-19-2009, 09:50 AM
Needs easing, force, and anticipation.

Also, this isn't noodlepageportal.

sth93888
01-19-2009, 05:19 PM
Try making limbs on the sticks, because they look like spaghetti.
The animation was smooth, but like herbivore said, it lacks force.
It's also a bit wobbly, and work on physics.

What do u mean by "on the sticks"? cuz all i can think of is attatched at the joint, but i dont think thats what u mean

proslayar
01-19-2009, 05:22 PM
Its actually not bad for you being new. Generally when someone is new to stick animating the anim goes WAY too fast, you dont have that problem luckily, just turn up the frame rate, and add more easing and youll be fine for now.

risingxphoenix
01-21-2009, 03:49 PM
What do u mean by "on the sticks"? cuz all i can think of is attatched at the joint, but i dont think thats what u mean

He means like don't make the line then bend it do one limb E.g Upper arm then attach lower arm not both at the same time then it looks floppy ,
Also it was quite smooth but there wasnt really any force in the kicks but it was quite lol for 3 kicks in the balls.