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doc
01-23-2009, 04:23 PM
just a shot. tell me what u think.
http:/ /truimagz.com/hosting/Public/shot.swf
http:/ /www.truploader.com/view_upload.php?id=615317
i cant post URL's yet. they're both the same thing, but on different sites in case u cant see it

Arch-Angel
01-23-2009, 04:52 PM
http://www.truploader.com/view_upload.php?id=615317

doc
01-23-2009, 05:48 PM
tx :D /

.Aklemo.
01-24-2009, 01:06 AM
It was okay to come from someone of your level.

Make the Limbs straight, not curly, don't tween too much. And add more effects, for example, the muzzle flash could have had a blur and a glow to make it more realistic, the smoke could be a little broken up and blurred and a little slower to a less height before it disappears and the bullet could have been blurred. It would have been somewhat better with a shell reaction. And one of those sticks' head was small, and the other was big. Redraw properly and modify if it's a small action. And the gun isn't detailed enough, needs a lot more detail and better colors. And the blood could have definitely been better thought it was a little too much blood for one gunshot to the head. Also, the bullet should have gone through his head, natural for a 9mm from that much of a close range. Work on your backgrounds more as well, inspire yourself with your own doings. And lower the FPS a bit to a more suitable one next time that really fits the animation. Keep practicing effects and realistic movements[Physics] And you are sure to get better. Also, you need to read some good tutorials.

Orange Blob
01-24-2009, 01:42 AM
it was okay, what .Aklemo. said :D

flip
01-24-2009, 06:58 PM
work on the smoke, rarley use tweens. good job.