View Full Version : Pellucid

01-29-2009, 03:40 PM
Leans a lot on lyrical symbolics.

You search for an answer
but questions can fade.
Let's drink from the ocean,
let's pull up your stakes.
The butterfly's lonely
he's always been.
I know you don't need this
not any of me.
But all that is left now
is glass.

Those dreams filled with silence
went by with the days.
Inertial movement,
internally spaced.
You like to quit thinking
so nothing gets near.
I know you're not talking
you're not even here.
And all that is left now
is glass.

The blossom's too wet for
the opiate to grow.
You're caught in the rings
but you want to go.
Seems like the water
is shining through.
I know you don't want this
but I want you.
All that is left now
is glass.

01-31-2009, 09:05 AM
Yeah .

01-31-2009, 05:26 PM
Sounds like a poem that my English teacher would hand out, which means it's pretty professional except I can't figure out what anything symbolizes in there.

Also, you misspelled "questions" in the first line.

01-31-2009, 05:28 PM
Oh yeah, thanks.

Thanks for the comment, I guess you'd have to understand too much about symbols and all that, but I'll leave it like this just to see wether anyone finds any symbols.

02-08-2009, 08:40 AM
It's been a while.

Woah, 200 views and just one comment?

02-16-2009, 09:47 AM
Uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu guyz r mean.

02-18-2009, 08:24 AM
FINE ILL COMMENT! would be great with some sort of catchy rythm