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Cizzil
02-01-2009, 03:14 PM
for my collab.

should i continue?

http://cizzil.deviantart.com/art/Future-fighting-test-111461914

stephenyoung91
02-01-2009, 03:28 PM
Lovin in so far, its nicely animated, and i love the leg attachment :) keep going

Cizzil
02-01-2009, 08:27 PM
Thanks man, I think i'll continue.

alcaknight
02-01-2009, 09:56 PM
Continue with it please. :)

Cizzil
02-02-2009, 07:04 AM
Thanks, any advice guys?

M3D
02-02-2009, 08:10 AM
Needs more exaggeration.
More fluidity.
Its a little shaky here and there also.

Those things lack the viewer to carry on watching , you need the viewer to like every part of it and enjoy it if it were 5 minutes.

You improved a fuking bunch though.
Nice effects =]

Cizzil
02-02-2009, 07:12 PM
Needs more exaggeration.
More fluidity.
Its a little shaky here and there also.

Those things lack the viewer to carry on watching , you need the viewer to like every part of it and enjoy it if it were 5 minutes.

You improved a fuking bunch though.
Nice effects =]

Thanks man, i'll try and work on that

Rabstar
02-03-2009, 12:37 AM
BIG IMPROVEMENT! :O

Near the end, maybe just make it 2 frames when he goes down, it looks too weak. I think you just need to work on your spacing, a bit more and you will be at around Pf0's + level. xD

sjmania
02-03-2009, 07:15 AM
Contiune it please
and your logo is cool

javarush214
02-03-2009, 08:44 AM
its nice but i noticed some flaws..


the head and the arms are resizing.. you should fix that other than that it's great.. love the effects