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Flood
02-03-2009, 09:47 PM
I'm really proud of this, it took like 2 days, for, 30 frames?

Anyway, c&c.


I didn't have to time to finish animating the body, because I wanted to upload it before I went to bed.
:3

proslayar
02-03-2009, 10:04 PM
Just keep practicing, it wasnt too good.

tomocles
02-03-2009, 10:06 PM
you animated it kinda wrong. You dissipated the beam as if all it really was was three different lines. Think of how a real beam would dissipate.

power fuse0
02-04-2009, 12:55 AM
you animated it kinda wrong. You dissipated the beam as if all it really was was three different lines. Think of how a real beam would dissipate.

lol.


The animation was pretty good but it confused me when the guy dissapeared.

Fazz-
02-04-2009, 04:26 AM
I thought it was fairly good but very short. I think you shouldn't have rushed to post an animation before going to bed, just go to bed and then work on it the day after so more people can give good c&c because with an animation so short it's hard to help someone improve it. So yeah, work on it a bit more then re-post it when you have an actual animation that can be used to get people to give you help.

MoD
02-04-2009, 05:11 AM
That looked nothing like a beam to me.

Flood
02-04-2009, 03:54 PM
you animated it kinda wrong. You dissipated the beam as if all it really was was three different lines. Think of how a real beam would dissipate.
Okay, I'll try and add that, to my next.
:3

lol.


The animation was pretty good but it confused me when the guy dissapeared.
Read, the post again. :D

That looked nothing like a beam to me.
What does a beam look like?