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soulworld05
03-20-2008, 07:50 PM
Newest pivot... Please crits more. As time pass, I will edit every new or redo the pivot. Thank you.

http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/6865/teleportmo0.th.gif (http://img178.imageshack.us/my.php?image=teleportmo0.gif) Teleporting

deadlock235
03-20-2008, 09:32 PM
the legs need to strectch out fully so it doesn't look likes hes crouch running
besides that the arm movements weren't bad

Sk8ingjenius
03-20-2008, 09:40 PM
he seems like hes in a sneak run. other than that, not bad. its sometimes tricky to get a good running animation in pivot

parka
03-20-2008, 09:55 PM
yes is running, but like an lodman, dont worry with the time you will make better

parka
03-20-2008, 09:57 PM
dammit, like an oldman, sorry i dont see what i write

pivotfreak747
03-20-2008, 10:13 PM
just bend his back a bit

TheCreator
03-20-2008, 10:49 PM
dude freak, thats the noob stick, you can't bend the back!

Index
03-20-2008, 10:59 PM
Extend his legs forward.

sheezy2
03-20-2008, 11:00 PM
just bend his back a bitOMG PIVOTFREAK u are a noob!! he cant bend back cuz its default. u just did a pointless bump

@ anim : lacked everything but i will give SOME applaud for the gravity fizics.
courtsey?

Komaru
03-20-2008, 11:15 PM
OMG PIVOTFREAK u are a noob!! he cant bend back cuz its default. u just did a pointless bump

@ anim : lacked everything but i will give SOME applaud for the gravity fizics.
courtsey?
OMG Who the hell are you?

soulworld05
03-20-2008, 11:26 PM
Thank everyone, I really appreciate all those comment. I just made other one. I hope its better. Its jump now. But for run, I'll work more on leg and try to bent.. But i dont think I can.

Just redo the run.. hope its better. I bend the back, I think the legs is little better. Can you explain me more about more wide?

=Rock=
03-20-2008, 11:56 PM
Parka.. there is such thing as an edit button, ya know?

wait.. i should probably pm him/her this....

i think pivot means make him lean forward

heyy... jump not bad, something about it bugs me though, dunno what.

soulworld05
03-21-2008, 12:02 AM
Thank Rock, glad you liked the jump. I have alot of good imagine but I just dont have good hands. I think its arms that bugs you. When its in air the arms seem alittle off. I think I'll redo that again.

soulworld05
03-21-2008, 11:51 AM
bump... look at first page ^ ^ just update

soulworld05
03-21-2008, 06:42 PM
Bump :( look like nobody want to crits my animation.