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Foda
02-07-2009, 10:36 PM
http://www.truploader.com/view_upload.php?id=14797


will finish

lavalzer
02-08-2009, 09:27 AM
wow thats easy a start to get on the web looks bit like shock though but all the rest from that its cool .... make it long

Foda
02-08-2009, 10:00 AM
thank you and it is going to be way longer

Kieran.
02-08-2009, 10:27 AM
nice animation... nice blood

can't wait for the finished version...

Foda
02-08-2009, 10:51 AM
yay at least someone cant wait

Foda
02-08-2009, 04:37 PM
i added more of it


http://www.truploader.com/view_upload.php?id=369806

Spiffy
02-08-2009, 04:40 PM
Well, it's pretty stiff. And you need a lot more anticipation. I'm sure you think this is just a generic critique, but you should really try and work on those two things.
I feel like I'm saying the same thing in every post, sheesh.

fitzy
02-08-2009, 04:54 PM
the whole teleportaion and the green guy just vanishing etc in that second version makes it hard to follow and i dont really like...probably just my opinion though but i dunno.

it looks decent, all my other critiques have been mentioned by others.