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Jevon
02-17-2009, 09:58 AM
http://www.truploader.com/view_upload.php?id=536521

This will be entitled Paradise. It will follow a number of peoples shitty lives. Kinda like monkey dust

http://www.truploader.com/view_upload.php?id=764070

This one im not sure yet, but I started working on it after I saw a cool anime film called Mind Games and I started making an audio track containing voice acting and stuff. I know it all looks very rough etc, its nowhere near started let alone finished.

crit is welcome etc

Wtf
02-17-2009, 10:35 AM
I love the first one
May I be your number one fan?

RawGreen
02-17-2009, 11:13 AM
twas good. In the second one, the dart was unrealistic in being thrown.

what did you use to make your sig?

Jevon
02-17-2009, 01:16 PM
Yay i have a number 1 fan!

thanks guys.

i made my sig with a pen and pencil.. then photoshopped it

fitzy
02-17-2009, 01:19 PM
yah the first one looks great. cant wait till you finish...ANYTHING

annoying thing is you could so easily be a well recognised animator, but you have nothing finished so you have nothing to show :P

Jevon
02-17-2009, 02:17 PM
hahaha you know me all to well fitzy my friend..

Im gonna have to start finishing things arnt i haha.

hows things on your end?

Mesmay
02-17-2009, 02:37 PM
annoying thing is you could so easily be a well recognised animator, but you have nothing finished so you have nothing to show :P

hes right :0


by the way, i LOVE the audio used.

Jevon
02-17-2009, 03:04 PM
well thanks buddy :)

which one? or both?

i record all of the audio myself.

the track in the first one though is aphex twin - rhubarb.

fitzy
02-17-2009, 03:41 PM
hahaha you know me all to well fitzy my friend..

Im gonna have to start finishing things arnt i haha.

hows things on your end?

yah i do...although i dont see you on msn too often these days :-/

LOL i remember when us 2 used to be about the same skill level, how times change :P but yah you need to finish stuff

my end isnt bad, although i finish stuff nearly as rarely as you :P actually its not that i start something and dont finish it, its either that i dont start stuff...or i work on stuff for too long cuz i just cba with it anymore but still take the stance that im gonna finish it (aka xiao style 3 >_>).

hope you finish these soon dude :) i look forward to the top one if you get it finished especially

Jevon
02-17-2009, 04:01 PM
hehe youre actually a lot better at animating sticks than i am nowadays!

lab shutdown is awesome.

add my msn bro : jevonjames@live.co.uk

not sure if i have you on that one.

Vervanda
02-17-2009, 04:05 PM
you remind me a lot of david firth

stephenyoung91
02-17-2009, 04:14 PM
I like them, well animated :) keep at it.

Jevon
02-17-2009, 05:45 PM
hey thanks stephen :)

and the comparison to david firth is awesome, thanks for the compliment :D