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Flood
02-17-2009, 07:41 PM
Its like my 3rd pivot. I'm a flasher, lol.

http://img6.imageshack.us/img6/4793/punchyu4.gif (http://img6.imageshack.us/my.php?image=punchyu4.gif)
http://img6.imageshack.us/img6/punchyu4.gif/1/w506.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img6/punchyu4.gif/1/)

Blaxo
02-17-2009, 08:41 PM
there's somthin weird about but i dont know what...but the punch was smooth!

Flood
02-17-2009, 09:10 PM
Thanks! :3

Anymore comments?

Rombie
02-17-2009, 09:53 PM
Put more emphasis in the back, and a little more easing nigguh.

poppetje3D
02-18-2009, 04:02 AM
Mby the step forwards was to fast?

zawmbee
02-18-2009, 07:11 AM
Beginner thread, simple as that.
Until you fix the stiffness caused by not enough joints being moved, it will never be smooth.

Ustartin
02-18-2009, 03:23 PM
Let's start at the bottom and work our way up, shall we?

Okie dokes, the legs don't bend at all. For such a vigorous punch he doesn't bend down at all. The step is also too quick, the step should still be going and ending just after the punch happens. Also, during the build-up to the punch, the legs should maybe bend back a bit with the back.

The back suddenly jerks forwards and backwards which isn't realistic. Again, for such a big punch it should ease back into the "natural position" slower, a few frames after the punch happens, the legs and the back should compliment eachother's movements.

The arms themselves look very nice, however for a successful punch it is not just about the arms. Like the back, they move too quickly back into the "natural position". For the whole thing to look right work on what I've said above, it's about the whole body. It looks like you read a tutorial for your punch, remember in tutorials though to look at the other parts of the body too!

Neat work (Pivot's all about trial and error), for now post your Pivots in the "Beginner's Section" until you get more skilled. Keep reading tutorials, they're really helpful. For a while you'll almost be just copying everything from tutorials but everyone develops their own styles.

poppetje3D
02-18-2009, 03:34 PM
:o Someone who gives good comments?!

OH NO.
IT IS THE END OF THE WORLD!

RUN RUN!


*runs far far away*

AAAH!

BANG BANG!

OMFG , ITS HERE!

NO NOT THE FACE!

HUMPFGGSERLL??!!

Ugh.........

Jontiways
02-19-2009, 05:34 AM
:o Someone who gives good comments?!

OH NO.
IT IS THE END OF THE WORLD!

RUN RUN!


*runs far far away*

AAAH!

BANG BANG!

OMFG , ITS HERE!

NO NOT THE FACE!

HUMPFGGSERLL??!!

Ugh.........

Wtf. Its pivot, you get mainly critism, and the odd pat on the back

Sliced to piezez
11-05-2009, 07:51 AM
Good Movie. :D but what you should fix is:

When he steps forward, he only goes back with the whole body, what you should do is to make him do this way:

Step forward.
Punch.
Move body forwards.
move body backwards.

Yes I know my instructions suck...

Phosphorus
11-05-2009, 07:56 AM
you know what else sucks? posting in 9 month old threads.

Vile.
11-05-2009, 10:04 AM
you know what else sucks? posting in 9 month old threads.


I had my flame cannon at the ready :[

bubbles
11-06-2009, 10:14 AM
this is the first animation I've seen of you and I expected it would be better than it was. But I expect your better at flash though.

poppetje3D
11-06-2009, 11:40 AM
Everybody Shut up , Look at the date.
Now stop spamming and bumping this thread because flood probably doesn't care.

Vacuum
11-07-2009, 12:40 PM
this is the first animation I've seen of you and I expected it would be better than it was. But I expect your better at flash though.

HOW ABOUT I SHOVE MY FOOT UP YOUR NoSE

stickiller13
11-08-2009, 10:35 AM
the punch went from low to high very fast, but otherwise good job!

bubbles
11-08-2009, 11:29 AM
HOW ABOUT I SHOVE MY FOOT UP YOUR NoSE

Oh yeah, you wanna go huh? you wanna go? I'm like 6 foot ye little bitch, huh I'll lay you on the ground and split you open bitch.

(just kidding I'm really a nice guy).