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javarush214
02-18-2009, 07:38 AM
http://rebellion214.deviantart.com/art/Raizen-part-2-113316177

fitzy
02-18-2009, 07:46 AM
WOW very nice you're an awesome animator :)
very well done

javarush214
02-18-2009, 07:52 AM
WOW very nice you're an awesome animator :)
very well done

thanks a lot fitzy ^^,

.Aklemo.
02-18-2009, 08:19 AM
'Twas really really epic. Great job and maybe it would go to the front page but idk

Rabstar
02-18-2009, 09:16 AM
Really goood, but, the style was completely different. Way more cinematic.

Nice.

fitzy
02-18-2009, 09:21 AM
Im waiting for it to get out of judgement :D i wanna see its score :P

javarush214
02-18-2009, 09:23 AM
yeah i hope it gets a highscore please gawd highscore!! and front page!!

fitzy
02-18-2009, 09:25 AM
LOL i wouldnt get your hopes up for front page, ofcourse it'd be great so i hope you do but sometimes even daily 2nds dont get front paged so yah...its better to not expect and be suprisingly happy than to expect and be dissapointed :D

javarush214
02-18-2009, 09:37 AM
yeah your right.. well im praying and keeping fingers crossed

fitzy
02-18-2009, 09:41 AM
LOL its been the last one in judgement for ages :P im looking forward to it almost as much as you methinks :P

Kaas
02-18-2009, 09:42 AM
Who's that with the sexy announcer voice? :O :P

It's awesome, like I said ^^

javarush214
02-18-2009, 09:53 AM
3.56.. this sucks

fitzy
02-18-2009, 09:56 AM
:( yeah i though it was gonna end up being dissapointing. dont fret though it'll probably go up by about .2 or so...you might be in with a chance of at least daily 5th.

and if it gives you some hope, when i submitted the animation in my sig it came out of judgement with 3.4...now its at 4.2

and ghostfight by justsolo had 3.36 coming out of judgement, now its in the top 50 :D

THERES ALWAYS HOPE :P
anyway its still a great animation.

javarush214
02-18-2009, 09:57 AM
:( yeah i though it was gonna end up being dissapointing. dont fret though it'll probably go up by about .2 or so...you might be in with a chance of at least daily 5th.

and if it gives you some hope, when i submitted the animation in my sig it came out of judgement with 3.4...now its at 4.2

and ghostfight by justsolo had 3.36 coming out of judgement, now its in the top 50 :D

THERES ALWAYS HOPE :P
anyway its still a great animation.

thanks yeah i hope so..

doc
02-18-2009, 10:01 AM
wow that was amazing, the ppl looked awesome

Ssjbryando
02-18-2009, 10:08 AM
Why didn't you tell me it was out yo :D!

Lmao, it was really really good. Thanks for the credits as well. My only complain was the re-play [First raizen part]. It kinda lasted long, and that wouldn't have mattered if there was music playing, or at least sound effects. But it was totally quiet the second half, and people might stop watching, or think that that's it.

But like fitzy said, it will change drasticly. Wait 100 or so more votes, and then check again. Seeing as if someone votes 5 now, it will probably go up with +.20 in one go

fitzy
02-18-2009, 10:09 AM
Seeing as if someone votes 5 now, it will probably go up with +.20 in one go


mmh...more like 0.02 or 0.01 but still makes a difference :D every high score counts :P

javarush214
02-18-2009, 10:09 AM
Why didn't you tell me it was out yo :D!

Lmao, it was really really good. Thanks for the credits as well. My only complain was the re-play [First raizen part]. It kinda lasted long, and that wouldn't have mattered if there was music playing, or at least sound effects. But it was totally quiet the second half, and people might stop watching, or think that that's it.

But like fitzy said, it will change drasticly. Wait 100 or so more votes, and then check again. Seeing as if someone votes 5 now, it will probably go up with +.20 in one go


lol acctually its my status in msn.. but i think your not in my msn again.. msn is **cking up

Ssjbryando
02-18-2009, 10:15 AM
mmh...more like 0.02 or 0.01 but still makes a difference :D every high score counts :P

Ok + 0.05 - 0.10

At least that was the case with the anime collab when I had like 200-240 votes. But it depends on what lvl the rater is :D

Even if its a status :O

And oh, that sucks o_O I have you in there though.

fitzy
02-18-2009, 10:17 AM
But it depends on what lvl the rater is :D

yes, massively.

still, the top levels still wont be adding any more than 0.06 or something but yah.....

javarush214
02-18-2009, 10:24 AM
damn somebody underrated it massively.. from 3.59 its now 3.50

-Hawk-
02-18-2009, 10:43 AM
So underrated... don't worry mate, NG is big enough for everyone to rape, I'll help you. =)

fitzy
02-18-2009, 10:53 AM
FUXXX 3.30 that sucks. mustve gotten a few 0's for some gay reason :(

javarush214
02-18-2009, 10:59 AM
sucks so bad.. i just hope i get a chance in the review crew pick

fitzy
02-18-2009, 11:10 AM
hmmm unfortunately life isnt always fair :( you deserve a higher score though. im actually surprised its THIS low...i expected about 3.6 maybe...at the least. you'll need alot of reviews giving 10s to get RCP.

I'm sure your gutted...i was devastated when xiao style 2 only had 3.4 :P

ah it seems you were so gutted you deleted it :-/ that could be a good ploy or could badly backfire. we'll see

poppetje3D
02-18-2009, 11:10 AM
Why the **** is it blamed?!

It was Awesome :S

fitzy
02-18-2009, 11:12 AM
it's blammed cuz he deleted it

javarush214
02-18-2009, 11:12 AM
I think ill just resubmit it next time.. ill just make chapter 3 for awhile


http://rebellion214.deviantart.com/art/Raizen-part-2-113316177

Ssjbryando
02-18-2009, 11:17 AM
Re-submitting is kinda a bad move. You will get A LOT of people voting 0 because of the fact you're submitting it twice. It happened to Hawk.

Luckily it wasn't on there for long, so it indeed can turn out well.

javarush214
02-18-2009, 11:19 AM
Re-submitting is kinda a bad move. You will get A LOT of people voting 0 because of the fact you're submitting it twice. It happened to Hawk.

Luckily it wasn't on there for long, so it indeed can turn out well.

yeah maybe ill resubmit it along with its third chapter...

tomocles
02-18-2009, 11:37 AM
what is with these people? I think you got all of the idiots who saw the sticks and instantly exited to blam it. That, or they thought that black screen was the end. Anyways, this was really great, man! Your anatomy was spot on when you werent trying to stylize it, and you had some great animation in it, too. Redesign how it begins, javarush. Maybe have a skip button when showing the "last time on raizen" part.

Mesmay
02-18-2009, 01:39 PM
LOL i wouldnt get your hopes up for front page, ofcourse it'd be great so i hope you do but sometimes even daily 2nds dont get front paged so yah...its better to not expect and be suprisingly happy than to expect and be dissapointed :D

my daily 2nd didnt get front paged :(

Ima say it got blammed, just so some fag will come in and tell me otherwise

Ssjbryando
02-18-2009, 01:50 PM
For the fifth time, it didn't got blammed. And read the first post Mesmay.... It shows another link.

He deleted it, he is gonna re-submit it.

I suggest you remove the NG link Java, for people who can't read.

Endo-K
02-18-2009, 02:02 PM
IT GOT BLAMMED?!?!! OHSHI- WTF!!!

Jookes. Very nice Java, your new style is very cool.

Mesmay
02-18-2009, 02:03 PM
k, rewatched it.

THAT is epic.

Seriously, you just get better and better, you're at such a high level right now. I remember when I was better than you ;-;



edit: oh, and who voice acted it for you? i need some voice actors and might go to them, if its a community.

-Hawk-
02-18-2009, 02:11 PM
I did <3 And Shanto did too, and there are more peepz in the credits. Javarush did too.

fitzy
02-18-2009, 02:33 PM
my daily 2nd didnt get front paged :(


neither did mine :(

wait...i dont have a daily 2nd...or 3rd 4th or 5th :(
i have a daily 6th though XD although that counts for nothing

java im looking forward to part 3...maybe when you do that you can link 2 & 3 together and submit them as 1...you'll get extra pointz cuz it will be longer. i think you may have already said something similar to this but i cant remember :(

Kaas
02-18-2009, 02:35 PM
I did <3 And Shanto did too, and there are more peepz in the credits. Javarush did too.
Me too, me too!! I did the "Previously on Raizen"

javarush214
02-18-2009, 07:19 PM
neither did mine :(

wait...i dont have a daily 2nd...or 3rd 4th or 5th :(
i have a daily 6th though XD although that counts for nothing

java im looking forward to part 3...maybe when you do that you can link 2 & 3 together and submit them as 1...you'll get extra pointz cuz it will be longer. i think you may have already said something similar to this but i cant remember :(

yeah im planning to do that.. last night i saw one submission from a level 33 user in NG nad has a damn high voting power, my score massively decreased from 3.60 down to 3.50 then some other assholes who didnt bother to watch and just cared for the newgrounds gold underrated it some more.. i ****ing hate this shit

fitzy
02-18-2009, 07:38 PM
you are thinking too negatively...people just think 'omg all newgrounders care about is exp points and blam points so the 0 everything'

but srsly they dont

javarush214
02-18-2009, 07:45 PM
you are thinking too negatively...people just think 'omg all newgrounders care about is exp points and blam points so the 0 everything'

but srsly they dont

some did.. i made an observation last night to the guy who submitted that submission i forgot the name.. he was like level 33.. all the scores o the submissions thathad a great score went down massively when he voted then his score raised higher.. im just pissed from last night.

Miccool
02-18-2009, 09:28 PM
Re-submitting is kinda a bad move. You will get A LOT of people voting 0 because of the fact you're submitting it twice. It happened to Hawk.

Luckily it wasn't on there for long, so it indeed can turn out well.
Yeah, it might turn out like how jcamelo owned himself three times over..lol

But, idk.. The pace was kinda slow and weird. I wasn't really "attracted" by it. I can see why some ppl might vote low. I liked it... but the bg's and stuff could have been better and the character design needs improvement. Although the animation was quite good so I think if you keep up with this style and improve your art, you'll get a lot better and eventually get scores in the 4's and higher.

HooFlungDoo
02-18-2009, 09:31 PM
Reminds me a lot of nero but more creative.

javarush214
02-18-2009, 09:38 PM
Yeah, it might turn out like how jcamelo owned himself three times over..lol

But, idk.. The pace was kinda slow and weird. I wasn't really "attracted" by it. I can see why some ppl might vote low. I liked it... but the bg's and stuff could have been better and the character design needs improvement. Although the animation was quite good so I think if you keep up with this style and improve your art, you'll get a lot better and eventually get scores in the 4's and higher.

yeah.. damn i got to improve on this.. i just hope i get my tablet soon.. so that drawing wont be much of a hassle.

Arch-Angel
02-18-2009, 10:31 PM
I disliked it.
Not that animation, there is pretty much no story line whatsoever.

That, and all that was involved in Raizen 2 was him killing the Oh so frightening "Venomancer", and breaking into a door. Not that epic.

I suppose it was good for what it was and the style?
Doesn't deserve front page.

javarush214
02-19-2009, 02:30 AM
I disliked it.
Not that animation, there is pretty much no story line whatsoever.

That, and all that was involved in Raizen 2 was him killing the Oh so frightening "Venomancer", and breaking into a door. Not that epic.

I suppose it was good for what it was and the style?
Doesn't deserve front page.

i was going to tell the story in chapter 3. if you saw the comment on NG i wrote

Arch-Angel
02-20-2009, 10:50 AM
A storyline has to be built as the series goes along. You cannot just have 2 random episodes and THEN a storyline. People will be confused and dislike it more.

You're basically saying, episodes one and two are senseless violence, but you'll get into a story-line in episode 3. I cannot think of anything that has a story-line that has done that.

javarush214
02-20-2009, 11:19 AM
A storyline has to be built as the series goes along. You cannot just have 2 random episodes and THEN a storyline. People will be confused and dislike it more.

You're basically saying, episodes one and two are senseless violence, but you'll get into a story-line in episode 3. I cannot think of anything that has a story-line that has done that.

acctually.. it was in part 1.. in part 1 he escapes.. and why was he in the tube. in part 2.. why was he bitten and why did he rampage.. in part 3 hell find out the answers.. i lined it up already.. just chillax and cut me some crap.