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Mesmay
02-19-2009, 03:41 PM
"I advise you watch this animation without any former expectations. After all, its more what you, as the audience, think rather than what I wish you to think.

Hopefully you like it still.

I wanna some people I guess, who I missed out in the credits:
-M1CKY (he did the end song which played during the credits)
-tomocles (he told me where to improve when I showed him this for the first time. I think it helped a lot to encourage to to finish)
-anyone I've missed

Thats about it. If you have any questions, feel free to ask (as long as they dont question the meaning of the anim) and please write a review- I might not reply to eery one but I DO read them and if they contain any crit I DO take it on board because I want to improve.

Relatively short commentary to match a very short animation.

Oh, and by the way- watch out for a site called T&M which might pop up somewhere soon- it'll have this along with a lot of my other work on it and if you like my stuff Id watch out for it.

Thanks for reading this."



copied from NG

http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/483982

So this was basically a little side project I almost gave up on a while back. (the epic stuff is still in the works)
Luckily mr javarush was there to inspire me :s

But yeah, I like it, but its not up to me, its up to you :D
Take a peek and gimme a review if you have the time.

Thanks.

Nervous :S

fitzy
02-19-2009, 03:49 PM
wow awesome you're turning into a great animtor! very creative, cute and well animated. not much more i can say, you made me emotionally attach and have empathy for the main character, which is a vital part of a piece like this. yoour creativeness is awesome, something i can never master :P so great job, well done, i 5'd it with no regret :D hope it gets a good score! actually hope it gets a GREAT score :D

STUFF
02-19-2009, 03:54 PM
The soundtrack went really well with the tone of the animation. Animation wise, it was really good, but I was a tad confused about the storyline.

Wtf
02-19-2009, 04:32 PM
I, without a doubt, love this.
Is this a tear? oh boy.

Foda
02-19-2009, 04:44 PM
that was fantastic very good song to go with it

fitzy
02-19-2009, 04:45 PM
nice score too...over 3.5 :) nearly 3.6 now...im guessing it'll just go up from here

javarush214
02-19-2009, 04:53 PM
5d! nice work mesmay i loved the Bg and stuff.. also i loved the story.

now its 3.66.. gudluck hope you get the daily top..

and glad to be of inspiration..

offtopic: as for me im gonna quit raizen for awhile and make some fullbody onehitwonder animations.. got disapointed a lot with raizen 2.

Mesmay
02-19-2009, 04:57 PM
wow thanks for the comments and reviews.
nice to know people liked it.

fitzy- the score is nice, yes, not what I hoped though :) it was higher for my last ani which apparently wasnt as good.

Im happy as long as it gets faved though, that means people were probably inspired.

javarush i doubt ill get daily top at this rate- i might still get an award though- i sure hope so.



<3

fitzy
02-19-2009, 05:30 PM
hmmm seems to be climbing constantly. i looked through submissions with higher scores and looks like your headed for daily 4th or 3rd...there are 2 submissions with 4.2+ so i wouldnt be expecting 1st or 2nd :P

and your last anim was seeds wasnt it? i thought that was great :-/

FoShizzle
02-19-2009, 05:39 PM
That was amazing.
Very well animated, music went well with the animation itself.
Awesome work, loved it.

Endo-K
02-19-2009, 05:39 PM
Too cute ;.;

5'd

fitzy
02-19-2009, 06:56 PM
hell yeahs 4.04 :O awesome :D

Mesmay
02-19-2009, 07:28 PM
4.07 :)

I think its peaked now, though.
Hasnt gone up or down in a while.




Its strange though, really; this outscores Seeds yet will only get Daily 5th, whereas Seeds got 2nd.

tomocles
02-19-2009, 07:36 PM
awesome job mesmay! I loved it. <3

Bonk
02-20-2009, 05:16 AM
The clap at the end broke the mood for me, but yeah otherwise it was pretty well done.

Aycaramba
02-20-2009, 07:40 AM
That was awesome, 5'd.

STUFF
02-20-2009, 08:01 AM
Daily 3rd, congratulations Mesmay.

doc
02-20-2009, 08:20 AM
the music was perfect, and the bg was awesome 2. i did get a bit confused with the storyline though

Shanto
02-20-2009, 08:22 AM
That was deep and awesome.

Great music choice.

Arch-Angel
02-20-2009, 09:44 AM
I got NG blocked from my school =[
I wouldn't be able to hear it anyways. Ima watch it when I get home tho =D

And I'll give it a 5

Oh, I was an inspiration. I mean, look at my user title, I'm God.
Edit: lol, NG is blocked for media downloads and entertainment. Yet not for mature content XD

Mesmay
02-20-2009, 09:45 AM
Look at MY user title.

desu

Arch-Angel
02-20-2009, 09:54 AM
I'm still god, even if you don't believe in me!

Mesmay
02-20-2009, 10:01 AM
But, you dont even exist.

Anyway, back on topic :(

Scorpioxxx
02-20-2009, 10:40 AM
Congrats on the daily 3rd, i've 5'd it twice for some reason.

Tawnik
02-20-2009, 12:57 PM
Great animation, tell everyone its about us ! :D

Let me check what my User title says, I forgot what I put there :c


edit, lol :D

Hyun
02-20-2009, 01:01 PM
Yay mesmay! That was really good story telling even with the simple lines and backgrounds. I knew what everything was and what was happening without questioning myself and it just made me feel good inside at the ending. I 5'd it and really think this thing should be on frontpage or something... >.>

Covalence
02-20-2009, 09:21 PM
Great stuff.

btw, good job on getting on the Frontpage

Shanto
02-21-2009, 05:42 AM
Front page.

Niiiiiiiiice.

Tawnik
02-21-2009, 06:00 AM
I dont see it on the fronpage :c does anybody have a sreenshot ?

btw, M1CKY is Toonking and Dj Vapour too.

sss
02-21-2009, 06:25 AM
Wow ! I accidentally clicked on this thread and i was amazed ! The best and the deepest animation I have seen for a long time . Can you upload it to rapidshare or megaupload? I want to download it .

fitzy
02-21-2009, 06:29 AM
yay front page well done :D

Tawnik
02-21-2009, 06:58 AM
Finally I see it, lol :D for those who dont its down this screen, watch it and be proud !

http://www.truploader.com/uploads/153079Mesmayssubmisionfrontpage.jpg

Its on the very bottom because I wanted the "Newgrounds" on the screen and I have only 15,4 display =)

sasuke21
02-21-2009, 07:00 AM
that was.... beautiful you really inspired me with that one!
awesome!