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sasuke21
02-21-2009, 04:19 AM
My newest and best flash so far c&c please so i can improve!

http://www.truploader.com/view_upload.php?id=598364

Shanto
02-21-2009, 05:41 AM
Work on easing.

Drawing you stick.

Making it smooth.

Making it...real.

sasuke21
02-21-2009, 06:49 AM
ok, but making it real?

sasuke21
02-21-2009, 06:53 AM
btw, i use ahtex!s tut.

fitzy
02-21-2009, 07:30 AM
by making it real he means realistic. the stuff just looked...not very good. its hard to tell with the small amount of animation there was but the kick needed more force and the punch just didnt look like a punch. also add an enemy so we know what your reactions of the other person look like.

sasuke21
02-21-2009, 08:05 AM
should i add more frames in the kick frame with small movement for more Power?

MrControversial
02-21-2009, 08:19 AM
it's sometimes best to actually remove frames, like have his legs just about crossing over for the kick, and then jump a few frames to the fully extended leg, this makes it look like he's kicking really fast.

sasuke21
02-21-2009, 08:29 AM
you were right! the result was awesome!

sasuke21
02-21-2009, 08:30 AM
http://www.truploader.com/view_upload.php?id=629248

fitzy
02-21-2009, 08:31 AM
its better...but now you have a small choppiness problem, and the punch at the start still sucks :-/ oh and i just noticed the massive resizing XD

i suggest starting over :-/

sasuke21
02-21-2009, 08:34 AM
instead of starting over i could edit some frames and free transform right?

fitzy
02-21-2009, 08:38 AM
you COULD but i really just think starting over is easier :-/ but your choice

sasuke21
02-21-2009, 08:40 AM
i free trasnformed it the resulthttp://www.truploader.com/view_upload.php?id=313339
a little better in my opinion, now it was that darn punch, any suggestions?

sasuke21
02-21-2009, 08:45 AM
sorry my wrong, it still resized heres the newhttp://www.truploader.com/view_upload.php?id=921254

1lasthero
02-21-2009, 08:52 AM
Yea its not very smooth, adding more frames before the punch and after, will make it better and more realistic. Don't give up.

sasuke21
02-21-2009, 08:53 AM
ok, do you mean a standing pose? or more frames in the punch?

fitzy
02-21-2009, 09:11 AM
LOL you really need to restart. srsly. your just editing the crap out of it when it cant be fixed.

i made my own version of the thing you did. its not that great really but i was rushing it xD. i just want to show you the way you can make more force in the punch and kick, make a smaller amount of resize and make it smoother and less sloppy. also you should make your sticks bigger.

http://www.truploader.com/view_upload.php?id=739987

if you want to use it as a template to help you, pm me your msn and i'll send you the fla. although like i say its not great but i still think it can help you. in that swf you can right click > forward to see the frames individually as they go. its 21 fps i think

sasuke21
02-21-2009, 09:15 AM
ok. thx fitzy youve been really helpful

fitzy
02-21-2009, 09:16 AM
you're welcome :) xD

punky28z
02-21-2009, 09:16 AM
Yo which animation is the best

sasuke21
02-21-2009, 09:18 AM
what do you mean?

doc
02-21-2009, 10:06 AM
make the guy bigger next time, he's way too small. everything else i can say has already been said, so im gonna save it.

Miccool
02-21-2009, 01:19 PM
Work on drawing your stickfigure.. make it bigger and make the limbs more apparent cause it looks really blobby kinda..