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Tawnik
02-23-2009, 06:05 AM
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/484519

Leaving a comment is worth than voting 5 !

Lixu
02-23-2009, 06:10 AM
I'm not in the credits? I am not? I thought we were friends :'c

Epic animation.

Tawnik
02-23-2009, 06:11 AM
Yes we are, but this is not my whole life project and since you didnt do anything in it I cant give you credits, I can give you credits for being my friend if you want to =)

Lixu
02-23-2009, 06:26 AM
Yes we are, but this is not my whole life project and since you didnt do anything in it I cant give you credits, I can give you credits for being my friend if you want to =)
No, no, never mind. I just have to get used to it nobody will put me in the credits. I'll die in a hole. Goodbye world. :'c

Tawnik
02-23-2009, 06:27 AM
With this thinking.. =)

Tawnik
02-23-2009, 01:44 PM
So after one day only Lixu has replied ?

What have I done wrong ?

Lixu
02-23-2009, 01:45 PM
You are far too epic.

Shanto
02-23-2009, 01:47 PM
Coo animation dawg.

I voted 4 cause im not in the credits, though. =D

Tawnik
02-23-2009, 01:49 PM
You are far too epic.

Actually Im not, people on Newgrounds punched me in face, I found Slide funny and well animated, worth like "4" but whatever, I got 3,16, NO IM NOT HAPPY WITH IT, I DONT CARE ITS SHORT.

Foda
02-23-2009, 02:46 PM
i love it. it made me laugh

-Hawk-
02-23-2009, 02:54 PM
Dude, NG is not a bunch of animators. On NG, there are a lot of viewers that know nothing about animation so they just comment on length and overall entertainment. You can never trust NG. =P

Omega
02-23-2009, 05:16 PM
Very nice job, smooth animation with an interesting amount of easing.

You're very good with fullbody characters.

stephenyoung91
02-23-2009, 05:24 PM
I lol'd so hard at that, haha nice one there

live2wrestle
02-23-2009, 05:38 PM
i gave you a 5/5. It was funny and had good animation, keep up the good work

fitzy
02-23-2009, 05:48 PM
yeah well animated :D my fav part was actually the guy being split in half xD. you're very good with the fb stuff now...and your BG's are well done too. good stuff :D

Arch-Angel
02-23-2009, 08:40 PM
3.28 / 5.00
3.30 / 5.00 (+ 0.015)

you're welcome,

nuff said.

Arch-Angel
02-23-2009, 08:43 PM
Lol, not really.
Try smoothening the figures more. Try changing your style around more, or add more detail to your scenery with the same style.

Make something longer and maybe try voice acting or getting people to record for you.

Also, I suggest changing the preloader. The vertical text was annoying.

LN3uq
02-23-2009, 08:51 PM
Pretty nice work, I did what I could
3.31 / 5.00 (+ 0.014)

STUFF
02-23-2009, 09:38 PM
Hah, I helped out more!
3.32 / 5.00 (+ 0.015)

And damn, that's pretty good. You should've made it a bit longer though.

Bonk
02-24-2009, 01:43 AM
Boo ya +.0027!

Yeah, it was cool, except the characters needed to be more defined, with thicker outlines and more contrasting colours. The mum running was also stupid, like she was hopping back and forth, but I knew what you were going for.

Also, the music seemed a bit off. Still, good work.

Tawnik
02-24-2009, 06:10 AM
Thank you guys, this is what Im looking for, I was so sad that no one liked it :( but now Im really happy, I see you like my stuff =) thats the way I want to animate with a lot of people that enjoy my animation.

Well I know that some of the drawings arent as good, but this animation is 2 months old I was waiting for Micky to finish the credits music and now Im drawing almost every day at school, thats the best way how to get better. Some of the poses I used in this animations were a bit off, the anathomy wasnt correct etc.But I like the chicks run, exactly what Bonk said "hopping back and forth" I really wanted it this way, cartoony, but I see its not working I will try not to be so creative while animating just running :D

And back to the idea, somebody asked me where the hell I get my ideas from, one guy on Newgrounds said this "the story just was random a bit.. i mean the guy just felt like doing that to the poor kid? but im not gonna take points off on that infact i gave u one point on the nice animation job, along with the hummer well done make more :D" (hellz0ne) actually I lol'd, because yes, this idea was random, I dont really think of kids getting ripped to two slices every day.


I love the preloader, sorry =)

Thanks for the comments, they appreciated =)

.Aklemo.
02-24-2009, 07:55 AM
Loved the credits.

Tawnik
02-27-2009, 12:24 AM
3,61 Thank you guys !! :D

Rabstar
02-27-2009, 12:31 AM
hahaa! Nice! I liked the music.
Awsome. :D

fitzy
03-03-2009, 07:49 AM
sorry for the bump, but i think its worth mentioning that at your initial dissapointment. you've (sortve) been front paged

http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/8356/tawnik.jpg

Tawnik
03-03-2009, 08:29 AM
I know :D still thank you fitzy :D

Wtf
03-03-2009, 10:30 AM
Congrats
I really love it.
The credits=OMFGEPIC

live2wrestle
03-03-2009, 04:31 PM
i loved it and credits were epic and i got rating up to 3.70