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1lasthero
02-23-2009, 07:07 AM
I've been working on this one all day yesterday. Please c&c and tell me what you think.

http://www.swfupload.com/view/103860.htm

stephenyoung91
02-23-2009, 11:41 AM
You certainly are improving, i can say that. But there is still a few things you can change, trying zooming more and using a higher smoothness on the brush, and that stroke is quite ugly, it highlights the blotchy parts of the legs, quite un attractive.

doc
02-23-2009, 01:35 PM
you got the movements really well, except for him falling on the ground and pushing up to a handstand. he kinda slid to the left when he fell, which i didn't really get, and he got really small right b4 the handstand. i know u were trying to show him curling up, but the limbs actualy got shorter. other than that it was good

1lasthero
02-23-2009, 07:44 PM
Yeah his limbs did get shorter, i'll fix that in my future animations, and thanks.