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tosyno
02-23-2009, 01:12 PM
Please you can critiscise or comment. No swearing.e.t.c

http://img525.imageshack.us/my.php?image=earthbendervsmen.gif

tosyno
02-23-2009, 01:18 PM
I am sorry i there was a mistake. :Sweating:
IMG]http://img525.imageshack.us/my.php?image=earthbendervsmen.gif[/IMG]

Vacuum
02-23-2009, 01:44 PM
http://img525.imageshack.us/my.php?image=earthbendervsmen.gif

There ya go.


You should post in the beginners section. You need to work on the movements.

littl3shad19
02-23-2009, 06:50 PM
not bad. Is it finished?

death killer 12
02-23-2009, 08:18 PM
i liked it man. nice job. now make a bigger and longer vesion.:Oh No!:
sweet

Rombie
02-23-2009, 10:15 PM
lol super great man your well on your way,

tosyno
02-24-2009, 07:04 AM
the animation isnt finished and i think i need a lot of help

poppetje3D
02-24-2009, 09:17 AM
... Sorry guys i don't wanna be mean but..
It totally sucks balls. :S

1lasthero
02-24-2009, 09:27 AM
lol It lacked a lot of frames but i guess its not bad for a beginner.

Rabstar
02-24-2009, 09:38 AM
Poppet...That was mean. =_=
It needed easing, more frames intbetween, needed to be less stiff...blah blah blah..

Vacuum
02-24-2009, 10:39 AM
Rab, that was waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay far from mean.

Seriously, have you seen my posts? I mean, the ones where I tell noobs what to do?



Yeah.

tosyno
02-25-2009, 08:41 AM
It is not done and i do not know what easing is :Happy: please tell me.

Rombie
02-25-2009, 01:00 PM
lol It lacked a lot of frames but i guess its not bad for a beginner.
lol that sucks for a beginner, there's like 5 frames, so theres really not any animation to comment on.
Spend more than 20 minutes on an animation, and actually try on it and you'll see results.

-EASING is the effect of slowing things down, beacuse nothing can go the same speed forever. One of Newton's Law says that everything must come to a stop if it is acted upon by an outside force.
-A better way of explaining it looking at yourself, when you move you have pauses in your motions and movements, you not constantly going all the time without stop, so easing is the effect of slowing after EVERY movement. Easing can be done at different speeds depending on the kind of feel your going for in your animations, so look around in the tutorial section to find tutorials, cause I know there's some really good ones in there. It takes a little practice to do, but after awhile its almost impulsive when your animating.

sheezy2
02-26-2009, 02:05 PM
Well, Rombie pretty much explained it, but let e make it more noob friendly for you.
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Imagine that |- is a normal frame. Right now in your animation your frames look something like, |-|-|-|-|. pretty bland, right? to make an animtion look much better make the frames space out more like this wheres "-" is the amount of movement in the frame. So to make your animation look better, try making your movements look like, |-|--|----|---------|----|--|-|

Well good luck and post in the begginer section!

Blaxo
03-03-2009, 04:42 PM
Not bad for a beginner. Work on your movements and add more frames.

live2wrestle
03-03-2009, 04:55 PM
hard to judge since it was so short but didnt look to bad

F-17
03-03-2009, 08:27 PM
balls!!
It good though for a low beg.

2-D
03-03-2009, 08:52 PM
its like i'm really watching Avatar

Vacuum
03-04-2009, 03:23 AM
hitler's a fag put it on 2 or more forums or he'll kill u tonight


Mr. Stickpimp's a fag, put this one one more thread and I'll kill you tonight.


its like i'm really watching Avatar

Sarcasm to the max.

Avian
03-04-2009, 07:48 AM
Not bad for a beginner. Work on your movements and add more frames.
I'm really surprised.
The anim was choppy, stiff etc.

Positive:
There was at least a tremor effect.

lewis345
03-11-2009, 12:47 AM
i can help what do you want help with???

Vacuum
03-11-2009, 05:11 AM
i can help what do you want help with???



DO NOT ACCEPT HELP FROM THIS GUY D:


The second anim in his sig is not his.

tosyno
05-31-2009, 03:43 PM
Thank you all for your help and comments. And i will try to learn easing

poppetje3D
05-31-2009, 03:50 PM
DO NOT ACCEPT HELP FROM THIS GUY D:


The second anim in his sig is not his.

Yes , and you are the greatest animator in the world :D

Everybody can help , you must know that!

Back to topic :D :
Your animations are stiff and uneased , So work on that.
Don't aspect you will be good in 2 days.
You must practice it.
But in a month or so you will get better.

Oh yea , and work on physics 2 :D

MOLProd
05-31-2009, 06:19 PM
It needs more frames, and the figures are bad. The background is... odd. And what did he do when all those rocks came up?