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Kieran.
02-26-2009, 02:37 PM
well... I have been working all night to try and get a submittable punch *7 tries* and finally i've come out with an ok one.....

I combined this with a mirror test... Its not meant to be a great reflection... I was just trying it out....

"WATCH" (http://www.*************/open/1235681128) ..........(click to watch)

Constructive critisism please....

Its at 18FPS..

Scorpioxxx
02-26-2009, 02:46 PM
Bend the back and give it a further 'pullback' when he goes to punch.

Kieran.
02-26-2009, 02:56 PM
thanks for the tips scorpio...

I learn a new way of gradienting the shadow after Dudeman's tutorial... so I should be releasing a new improved version probably tomorrow...

(anymore tips would help)..!

doc
02-26-2009, 03:12 PM
bring his head forewards on the body towards the end, when its back that far it looks more like some kind of flailing. and the back leg is a bit wobbly, but i don't c anything else wrong with it, so nice job

AeternaUmbraNox
02-27-2009, 03:46 PM
Make the mirror effect look better, a tip: make the mirror stick man colour linear and make the upper side like this picture.

I also added glow, you can experiment with the filters.

Second Sight
02-28-2009, 05:37 AM
Also you may want to increase the smoothness coz they were very jagged and badly drawn.

Tommysenf
03-02-2009, 01:18 PM
its a nice animation with a awsome ground.