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RaGe SaUcE
02-28-2009, 04:53 PM
http://www.stonesbucket.com/upload/view_upload.php?id=8PJeYuWS

this is really only my second posted animation on stickpage, this is just something i did in 30 minutes but i got lazy and decided to loop it, plan on taking the loop out and polishing it up a bit later...(like actually adding the force animation into it lol) any way C&C please

[EDIT] i just realized that my after image has no head so ill fix that later

Tawnik
02-28-2009, 04:55 PM
be more patient and you'll become good animator ;)
the easing wasnt correct, for how fast was the start it should slow down and the go down the rise the speed and land.

RaGe SaUcE
02-28-2009, 05:01 PM
be more patient and you'll become good animator ;)
the easing wasnt correct, for how fast was the start it should slow down and the go down the rise the speed and land.

ill try to be more patient and work on easing, thanks for the advice:Smile:

Kieran.
02-28-2009, 05:04 PM
why were his arms randomly above his shoulders....?

for a reason?

If not... that need fixing

Tawnik
02-28-2009, 05:07 PM
theres another thing I can point out, right before he jumps he has to prepare for the jump itself, he has to have some energy.
The simile is, you have to reload slowly and shoot powerfully..
once the reloading fails you cant shoot..

once you dont have good preparing/anticipation you cant do good jump, or whatever you need to animate.

RaGe SaUcE
02-28-2009, 05:09 PM
thanks again ill keep that in mind

Tawnik
02-28-2009, 05:13 PM
Im happy you can accept the critism, because a lot of people cant do that, I think you'll be good animator :)

Miccool
03-01-2009, 12:21 AM
The arms are kinda wack.. i mean they're just sticking up there >_>

Just keep practicing, you'll get good (hopefully)