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joaoba16
03-04-2009, 04:11 PM
Hi, guys here are my 3rd and 4 animation, I know it sucks but Im learning all comments will be accepted.

Thks

http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/040309/80942_running_test.php

http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/040309/81001_stick_fight.php

:Smile:

http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/070309/73430_lol.php


This is probably the worse of the three, but I try, xD

javarush214
03-04-2009, 04:50 PM
the run was not stiff, but the arms i kinda wobly, specially when he kicked the purple guy, the guy didnt even move, and if the guy who kicked was supposed to be pushed in the air, it was way too slow.. imagine this. would you be able to push yourself in the air if your kick was too weak?.. he should be launched in the air fast, then slowly, goes down.

for the combo.. the combo was fine.. you have potential in this but you need to improve on the wobbliness of your animation. check out the arms and the leg it wobbles.. if you fix that im sure your anim will be better

joaoba16
03-05-2009, 10:28 AM
Thks for the help...more comments plz :Cry:

joaoba16
03-06-2009, 04:32 PM
Cmon, I hate double posts...but only one comment! :Nooooooo:

Jerocome
03-06-2009, 05:08 PM
Pretty good, but it was real stiff and wobbly.
When he hit the guy, the guy should've been hit back by the force of the kick, then, by the law of gravity fall down to the ground hurt for a kick of that force wouldn't hit some one :D

joaoba16
03-06-2009, 05:13 PM
Yeah I know, but this is just a test, of course the guy shouldnt stay still...:heh:

Jerocome
03-06-2009, 05:15 PM
Still, it could be a test of running, a kick, AND of what happens when you're hit with a kick ^.^

joaoba16
03-07-2009, 01:22 PM
More Comments plz---

Miccool
03-08-2009, 12:12 AM
Work on the blurs too..

Kill Production
03-08-2009, 12:27 AM
You forgot to add some head

KieranPeterson
03-15-2009, 04:54 PM
There wasnt any prime for the jump, and was the blurred kick just one still frame? Didnt look that great. Keep it up though. Watch some videos to get an idea of motion and physics and the human body. That helps. And do they have heads? :S