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javarush214
03-04-2009, 09:34 PM
i decided that ill just combine chapter 3 and 2 together so that the story would be understood..

anyways heres a sneak peak


http://www.truploader.com/view/638066


C AND C AND C

supranova
03-04-2009, 11:05 PM
Great job. The angles you used are very well done.

My one complaint is that, as he is running toward the door, that his body should bounce up and down a bit more instead of staying level. Unless, of course, that was your intention.

Great work no matter what, thou.

javarush214
03-04-2009, 11:08 PM
Great job. The angles you used are very well done.

My one complaint is that, as he is running toward the door, that his body should bounce up and down a bit more instead of staying level. Unless, of course, that was your intention.

Great work no matter what, thou.

thanks ill work on that.. ^^

more C and c

Rabstar
03-04-2009, 11:37 PM
What supernova said, the rest was very good. :D

Lixu
03-05-2009, 05:43 AM
Very good job, till now, Javarush.
Though, the whole background are so nice clear lines, and 1 colour, then a fb character gets in that is drawn with a sloppy brush, try to fix that. Make your characters like Raizen 2 in the beginning.

javarush214
03-05-2009, 05:51 AM
Very good job, till now, Javarush.
Though, the whole background are so nice clear lines, and 1 colour, then a fb character gets in that is drawn with a sloppy brush, try to fix that. Make your characters like Raizen 2 in the beginning.

yeah your right, well it's hard for me now, till i get the tab. but thanks a lot.

megaanims
03-05-2009, 06:11 AM
hey dude that was awesome can't wait to see more btw mentor me in flash

Kieran.
03-05-2009, 10:29 AM
looks awesome <3 its gonna be great man..

Wtf
03-05-2009, 11:19 AM
Good but the face looked retarded.
Change it.

-Hawk-
03-05-2009, 11:31 AM
You're doing really good man, keep it up, nice style and angles.

Mesmay
03-05-2009, 11:56 AM
the only bit i hate, its how you separate the lighter shades from the darker shades with a black line. it shouldnt be like that because psychologically it stops it from looking much like a shadow zone.

apart from that, very nice :P hopefully as inspiring as the last

Tawnik
03-05-2009, 12:39 PM
It was nice but I dont like the running, its un eased and stiff :D personally I'd prefer more fluid movements, but its really good animation, very entertaining, finish it =)

javarush214
03-05-2009, 04:04 PM
the only bit i hate, its how you separate the lighter shades from the darker shades with a black line. it shouldnt be like that because psychologically it stops it from looking much like a shadow zone.

apart from that, very nice :P hopefully as inspiring as the last


It was nice but I dont like the running, its un eased and stiff :D personally I'd prefer more fluid movements, but its really good animation, very entertaining, finish it =)

@mesmay

well its the style of the animation.. anyways your right.. but i dont konw.. because if i make changes now, it will be different from the ones i started already.. ya know what i mean?

@tawnik.. i didnt add much easing like i animate raizen because.. the enemy should be like super fast and shit.

Mesmay
03-06-2009, 01:50 AM
yeah :P
but think how different 1 was from 2.

javarush214
03-06-2009, 02:26 AM
yeah :P
but think how different 1 was from 2.

yeah i know what i mean is the style in the whole chapter not the whole series lol..

megaanims
03-06-2009, 04:53 AM
still way cool btw online yahoo naw

New Generation
03-06-2009, 09:12 AM
Not bad but I think the character is too simple, His body looks kind of awkward, I know it's hard to draw full body but this is not really proper full body. Good try though. I liked the sound effects.

Jerocome
03-06-2009, 03:26 PM
I loved it.
The fullbody was real good, to me.
The angles were great.
He maybe should have bounced up and down more when running but, what do i know?
The slash was cool, i can't wait until you finish :D

javarush214
03-06-2009, 04:49 PM
thanks guys ^^, ill sure do that..

more c and c?

tomocles
03-06-2009, 05:18 PM
sorry, but the line seperating the shading is ugly. :( you should take the brush tool, set it to paint inside, and then go over the whole line seperating the shading from the body.

javarush214
03-06-2009, 05:42 PM
sorry, but the line seperating the shading is ugly. :( you should take the brush tool, set it to paint inside, and then go over the whole line seperating the shading from the body.

whoa.. thats kewl

hahaha never knew this was available