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risingxphoenix
03-12-2009, 05:55 PM
Btw this is probably the first animation I've attempted in the past 6 months and i don't think it turned out a complete disaster but oh well

http://www.truploader.com/view/702899

Kieran.
03-13-2009, 01:15 PM
too slow..

no easing...

bad effect..

keep working on it

doc
03-13-2009, 02:04 PM
was that blood that came from his head? it looked like a ribbon. make it not all attached and make it fall to the ground. and he twitched a bit at the beginning.

KieranPeterson
03-15-2009, 05:42 PM
Try making the blood spatter onto the background or something, dosent have to be stipple, can just be lines. And when he winds up, put his arm higher, it looks like hes going for an uppercut otherwise. And use some other effect to give it more force, or make the second character fall faster.
Otherwise it was pretty good.