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megaanims
03-13-2009, 12:37 AM
okay I'm posting this again cuz no one's posting in like what more than 5 hours
http://i40.tinypic.com/33z8msl.gif

MaxZ
03-13-2009, 12:42 AM
I've posted 2 replies in the beginners.

megaanims
03-13-2009, 01:01 AM
okay they were fast kicks but still is there any improvement

MaxZ
03-13-2009, 01:14 AM
Nah, I don't see what you changed

megaanims
03-13-2009, 02:36 AM
ahhh you gotta be kidding

megaanims
03-13-2009, 02:57 AM
animation bump!!
http://i43.tinypic.com/332p1m9.gif
(sorry for double posting)
gun test
http://i42.tinypic.com/29ztmz4.gif

band_it
03-13-2009, 06:04 AM
I did think you're getting better at the first post...
but, like I said to so many animators :P spent your time on your anim, and don't forget to check easing and stuff
and don't do a one frame trails , and try to move all the joints every frames

and get back to beginners section I think?

Rabstar
03-13-2009, 07:05 AM
LOL, It ain't supposed to turn completely yellow...lol

Axl45
03-13-2009, 08:12 AM
You should drop the trails and effects. Its kinda killing the anim for me because they are off. And for the gun test the whole guy doesnt need to turn yellow. Just a bit of his arm. Ive never seen a gun that causes that much flash when it is shot

zawmbee
03-13-2009, 11:45 AM
Go back to the beginner thread.

Axl45
03-13-2009, 12:02 PM
Go back to the beginner thread.

I agree with zawmbee

megaanims
03-13-2009, 11:02 PM
what about this?
http://i42.tinypic.com/15gp6yu.gif

poppetje3D
03-14-2009, 03:15 AM
that one is nice , not much to comment on that one...

band_it
03-14-2009, 05:44 AM
the physics is weird, need more reaction, and some more easing, back to beginners section I guess?

and add more tremor effects on that one

megaanims
03-14-2009, 06:43 AM
what makes the physics weird band it anyway any improvement?
http://i44.tinypic.com/1z4wied.gif

Automaton
03-14-2009, 06:55 AM
from a drop like that he wouldn't bounce. And it's a little too uneased.

band_it
03-14-2009, 07:05 AM
what makes the physics weird band it anyway any improvement?
http://i44.tinypic.com/1z4wied.gif

if you want to make him bounce, make him bounce for a couple of time, or make the bounce higher

from a drop like that he wouldn't bounce. And it's a little too uneased.

you can do as he said, but add more camera movements over the land, I mean like add super tremore effects, and decrease the frames of him when he's going to hit the ground




and, as I said for so many times, spent your time on your anim, think about the movements, try to move all the joints in a frame, keep the easing up, and try a multi directional combo with better link, I think you are still med-high beginner, sorry ^^

megaanims
03-14-2009, 07:22 PM
okay fine *walks to beginner thread sulking*

billster-knight
03-14-2009, 07:59 PM
hey mega, you improved from the last time i saw you.... try not doing combos, try 2 stickmen fighting so you can improve.

cheers

Saha
03-14-2009, 08:11 PM
I agree with zawmbee

Seriously, I don't.

Sorry, zawmb man.

But, I kinda like hes anims :D

Well, you need to work on your movements the most.
Also, move your back joint. Its too stiff. You've gone way better than the last I've say you.

Like, last year?

megaanims
03-14-2009, 08:22 PM
thanks saha but one question is it stiff only or a bit uneased
the last combo anim I will make for a while
http://i40.tinypic.com/2jbhio.gif

Automaton
03-14-2009, 09:01 PM
better, but you need to make it flow better. It's a little too fast, and the movements stop too abruptly then move into the next quickly. You need to make them flow into each other, whilst still easing.

band_it
03-14-2009, 11:16 PM
okay fine *walks to beginner thread sulking*

lol, I think you've gone to beginners thread :p

okay, I've to admit, you have improved, but still you couldn't manage the movements and easing, like in the last anim, the arm is stiff, but the leg is so eased in some place, and yeah, you need to make it flow, before the end of the easing, you could prepare for the next move, and try a fight, or basic movement first, sure it'll make you improve

hey, can you give me your msn or ym?

I lost it <.<

megaanims
03-15-2009, 12:06 AM
it's: megaanims_pivot@yahoo.com.ph band_it
new anim
http://i42.tinypic.com/11rqiq0.gif
I think there's something with the gravity
another one
http://i42.tinypic.com/11h9jtd.gif

billster-knight
03-15-2009, 08:57 PM
wow saha like your animations....... *shocked* and he didn't agree with zamwbehhhh

megaanims
03-15-2009, 10:01 PM
wow saha like your animations....... *shocked* and he didn't agree with zamwbehhhh
well he might be sarcastic but if he really does like my anims I'm just as shocked as you are
new anim
http://i43.tinypic.com/2n6ycz5.gif
;) parkour

band_it
03-16-2009, 07:28 AM
it's: megaanims_pivot@yahoo.com.ph band_it
new anim
http://i42.tinypic.com/11rqiq0.gif
I think there's something with the gravity

yeah, you need to make it jump a bit more I think.....

another one
http://i42.tinypic.com/11h9jtd.gif

not flowing enough, better use the normal stick


well he might be sarcastic but if he really does like my anims I'm just as shocked as you are
new anim
http://i43.tinypic.com/2n6ycz5.gif
;) parkour

I like the ending, the movements were gread there, but the jump -> spin is weird

megaanims
03-16-2009, 06:35 PM
thanks band_it do you see any improvement

band_it
03-17-2009, 03:27 AM
a bit, I think you're similiar to me...
anyway, you just improving in some part and get back to your normal quality in another parts....

Avian
03-17-2009, 09:53 AM
A bit fast, eh ? Slow down a bit.

Does anyone know why does Zawmbee have a Shelgon [Pokemon] avatar ?

megaanims
03-17-2009, 06:39 PM
well here's a new one bit hevy spaced in some parts
http://i43.tinypic.com/2cx6osp.gif
(I ran out tricks to try don't mind the ending)

band_it
03-18-2009, 05:55 AM
the physics just weird......
need more easing, I hate how you use too much heavy spacing

megaanims
03-18-2009, 06:00 AM
first of all what makes weird I tried making realistics as possible and hevy spaced only when he goes down the ramp
so far any improvement
p.s
all posters pls always post about my improvement

Saha
03-18-2009, 08:59 AM
http://i43.tinypic.com/2n6ycz5.gif

All is easing, stiffness and physics problem.
1st flip sucked needs more easing . 1st jump was alright still need more easing. 2nd flip SERIOUSLY sucked. Easing problems all the way, not to forget physics. After the 2nd flip what the hell did you do? Seriously, if you did the flip, then it was horrible beyond all belief. The 2nd Jump needed to be more eased at the end. The part where he goes through the door also need more easing :\ Watch Terkoiz's SHOCK animation. It will help you alot. Watch it frame by frame too.


http://i40.tinypic.com/2jbhio.gif
Its still the same.. Stiff and uneased. Haha, I see you saw Baha's tutorial :D

Also, I saw a bit of jerkiness and choppiness in between the kick and the punch.

Lemon
03-18-2009, 01:36 PM
I think it's good. Considerably better than the other crap we get in the pivot section.

With a few exceptions.

megaanims
03-18-2009, 06:36 PM
thanks 4 cc saha same thing with you lemon
trail test with a little spice
http://i44.tinypic.com/4tvng9.gif

Saha
03-18-2009, 07:13 PM
The easing at the end was a bit of a problem.

@ the skate anim

It was too fast.. way too fast.

band_it
03-19-2009, 05:02 AM
thanks 4 cc saha same thing with you lemon
trail test with a little spice
http://i44.tinypic.com/4tvng9.gif

yeah, weird easing in the end, the color change seems to be weird for me too, and the effect just disappear too fast...
the trail and the stick movements look stiff .... but meh..

just a little bit improvements from the ramp thingy

megaanims
03-19-2009, 10:13 PM
new anim combo thingy again
http://i44.tinypic.com/211ngnc.gif

band_it
03-20-2009, 04:18 AM
you start to show no sign of improvement, and you are getting worse, if you're too bored with pivot/ animating, just go around to have fun, after that start animate again, don't be too serious at animating..

anyway, the new combo one is... stiff..
need more frames of easing,and keep practicing of course

megaanims
03-20-2009, 08:02 AM
okay btw ym online naw

pivot_god
03-21-2009, 05:48 PM
The improvement is the speed and smoothness and easieng on it!
Keep Up Man!

If i have another grammar or miss spell nvm me!

~Pivot_God

Jontiways
03-22-2009, 01:26 PM
well he might be sarcastic but if he really does like my anims I'm just as shocked as you are
new anim
http://i43.tinypic.com/2n6ycz5.gif
;) parkour


this looks really odd to me. after the first jump over the chair thing it goes funny; he jumps backwards, rolls forwards in the air. grabbing was a little off, and the flip hold wall thing looked weird since i diddnt know at the end if he was going through the door backwards or forwards.
I do like the idea.

megaanims
03-22-2009, 09:13 PM
thanks guys you rock
got bored and decided to post this might make it longer
http://i44.tinypic.com/28cmv6p.gif

Lemon
03-23-2009, 11:41 AM
Your getting better and better.

poppetje3D
03-23-2009, 01:02 PM
idd .

megaanims
03-23-2009, 09:01 PM
idd .

what's that supposed to mean

live2wrestle
03-23-2009, 10:20 PM
youre getting a lot better

Fries
03-23-2009, 10:31 PM
i like it. its pretty good

FoShizzle
03-23-2009, 11:01 PM
idd .

idd = i don't decide

wtf?

megaanims
03-23-2009, 11:22 PM
so what's have to do with me

band_it
03-25-2009, 09:41 AM
thanks guys you rock
got bored and decided to post this might make it longer
http://i44.tinypic.com/28cmv6p.gif

you shouldn't stick with an one way combo, try to add something between the combo, or add enemy to practice your reaction, and try new move like aerial kick, headbutt, roll, etc. it'll help you, or try to make a walk cycle everytime you want, and post it with another animation, I just see that your easing is improving, but need more parctices

megaanims
03-26-2009, 12:22 AM
hey testing out avatar moves
http://i43.tinypic.com/28gqpok.gif
still not finished I'm gonna add water and air if I know how
new anim 3d
http://i41.tinypic.com/919ksk.gif

band_it
03-26-2009, 05:55 AM
hey testing out avatar moves
http://i43.tinypic.com/28gqpok.gif
still not finished I'm gonna add water and air if I know how

I'll be impressed if you made all those sticks :3
and I see more improvements here, just try more easing :D


the second anim: not bad, but looks stiff and need more jump for the kick?
and like the 3d effects :)

megaanims
03-26-2009, 06:05 AM
thanks band no I did not make the stkz and @ the second is not stiff

band_it
03-26-2009, 07:13 AM
thanks band no I did not make the stkz and @ the second is not stiff

i don't know wether it's stiff, choppy of fidgetyness that I saw at the ending...

megaanims
03-26-2009, 11:39 PM
new anim
I think it's kinda cool so far since it's my first counter it really shows my improvement in pivot
http://i42.tinypic.com/2nqch2x.gif