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alcaknight
03-14-2009, 10:37 AM
http://www.truploader.com/view/195925

This is just a small walk and run test I made because I was bored. The effect I did wasnt that great but I liked it. :Happy:

C&C please and thank you!

Cizzil
03-14-2009, 11:05 AM
effect was gay. It ruined it. Also, your sticks look like one blob.

alcaknight
03-14-2009, 11:09 AM
effect was gay. It ruined it. Also, your sticks look like one blob.
Yeah, I know. The effect wasn't that great, but just ignore it. What do you mean one big blob?

Foda
03-14-2009, 11:15 AM
have you posted this before and just added an effect?

alcaknight
03-14-2009, 11:17 AM
have you posted this before and just added an effect?


Nope, I just made this today.

Kieran.
03-14-2009, 11:49 AM
your sticks are too fat... and you need to move the arms more

other than that... keep it up!

alcaknight
03-14-2009, 12:07 PM
your sticks are too fat... and you need to move the arms more

other than that... keep it up!

Hmm.... too fat.... :Cold: I like them small and compact but I will try and make them a bit thiner haha. :Happy:

I usually dont move the arms much when I am just messing around, but I need to start to haha.

Cizzil
03-14-2009, 03:26 PM
when i said blob, the brush is too big, and he is too small. basically you did that to cover up a lack of animatino skill. :(

alcaknight
03-14-2009, 04:12 PM
when i said blob, the brush is too big, and he is too small. basically you did that to cover up a lack of animatino skill. :(

Well if I did cover up my animation skill, I certainly didnt mean to. :Happy:

Arch-Angel
03-14-2009, 05:12 PM
Why do people copy me?
Seriously though, the effect isn't that good unless the movements are small. That's why I never use it with my movements.

alcaknight
03-14-2009, 05:53 PM
Why do people copy me?
Seriously though, the effect isn't that good unless the movements are small. That's why I never use it with my movements.

You do this? Woah. Sorry. :Happy:

doc
03-15-2009, 06:47 AM
the movements were pretty good, just move the arms more.

KieranPeterson
03-15-2009, 04:33 PM
Its half decent. Is he supposed to have a head? Because at first glance, all i could really make out was his torso and limbs. And out of curiosity, how did you decide to do the effect?

alcaknight
03-15-2009, 05:08 PM
Its half decent. Is he supposed to have a head? Because at first glance, all i could really make out was his torso and limbs. And out of curiosity, how did you decide to do the effect?

Do you mean how did I do the effect?