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Blot
03-23-2008, 06:57 AM
this is my first sword swing that i have properly tried and i think it turned out ok ...... i added trail for effect http://i264.photobucket.com/albums/ii184/edwardo0/overheadswing.gif

thedemonata
03-23-2008, 08:00 AM
Pretty nice man, i have a suggestion tho.Instead of moving the left foot first use the right foot.But other then that its perfect.

Sherbet
03-23-2008, 08:27 AM
nice XD, i wanna do sumin as good as this one day

Dax
03-23-2008, 08:31 AM
You have to make the legs cross over, and add more frames to smooth it out, but pretty good for a first.

killtrech
03-23-2008, 09:17 AM
Not bad for a first, but the action lines need to be seperate and go smoother.

suliro
03-23-2008, 09:27 AM
the legs have no point of mouving the sword swing is ok but it would be bad in a thite you need a beter program and HTF did you make the trail

bustastks
03-23-2008, 09:50 AM
yeah, the legs look pointless when moving. But otherwise NICE!!

sss
03-23-2008, 02:32 PM
Only effects were pretty good

Da' Hatta
03-23-2008, 03:12 PM
That was a great swing and I think it was worthy of being in a full animation.

torjus
03-23-2008, 03:18 PM
i think this is rubbish. because this looks as worse as a first aniamtion thing. and its not.
tip: learn how to walk run jump, easeing, before you think about sword swings and stuff like that. and try to make your own sticks. and move the backward leg slowly forward. right before it touches the ground the you should have done the swing.

Jet
03-23-2008, 03:40 PM
Yehaw before you try effects improve your *ahem* animations. and basics.

Blot
03-23-2008, 10:19 PM
yeh yeh i thort it was good

soundawk
03-24-2008, 12:30 AM
needs some back movement, get to it, add some realistic movements and you're one the road to improvement

Blot
03-24-2008, 05:15 AM
it was only a sword swing

invertin
03-24-2008, 05:46 AM
If it's just a sword swing why was there a stickman?

I'm sorry, but we are very very picky here. If you make an animation, either don't include the stick figure or try hard to animate him as well.

That said, the swing effect was good, if slightly choppy.

Blot
03-24-2008, 05:51 AM
no i was testing if i could do a sword swing its not like turnign into a series or anything..... i can do the swings but it looks gay with arms so i kept trying gort better

Blot
03-24-2008, 05:54 AM
btw while im here anyone got a good fighting tut the others r good but arnt good for long series......... so anyone?

invertin
03-24-2008, 05:55 AM
It doesn't matter, everyone but me seems to have the magical power to see every frame individually and see every tiny mistake.

Besides, this is criticism, if you try to move everything on the screen then you'll get used to moving stick men and swords at the same time. Or, more used to it if you've animated before.

Blot
03-24-2008, 06:01 AM
yeh i have animated before and thanks so do u have a good fighting tut

Knightsy
03-24-2008, 07:22 AM
looks like bambi on ice