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reqtor
03-22-2009, 07:14 AM
here it is my throw test www.stonesbucket.com/upload/view_upload.php?id=2FSaLjIf
http://www.truploader.com/view/203591
please crits
say what i am doing wrong

MaxZ
03-22-2009, 07:44 AM
STIFF really stiff.

reqtor
03-22-2009, 07:59 AM
yea my anims are stiff because i dont know stick positions :(

MaxZ
03-22-2009, 08:09 AM
Not a excuse .

doc
03-22-2009, 08:29 AM
use a different upload site, i cant see it

Kieran.
03-22-2009, 09:22 AM
you need to flow through with the punch and add more easing.

keep trying!

.Aklemo.
03-22-2009, 10:18 AM
You're using line, either drag the limbs for small movements and redraw for long. But modify the limbs in any of the way carefully, pretend he's a real human being, imagine how he would throw the thing. It has to have easing also, use onion skin properly, the feet resized. Here, watch this - http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/435752

And you better improve mate, good luck.

stickdudethestick
03-22-2009, 10:24 AM
lol stickman has no head...i actually think that makes it pretty cool

MaxZ
03-22-2009, 11:02 AM
That is because, drawing a head every frame looks awfull.

reqtor
03-22-2009, 02:06 PM
tnx for crits
.Aklemo. tnx for tutotial

FoShizzle
03-22-2009, 02:39 PM
Work on easing and stiffness, give the stick a head.