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allyman8
03-22-2009, 08:18 PM
Didn't wanna post these, because they suck, but meh, whatever.

Criticism please.

All of em':
http://www.truploader.com/view/80736
http://www.truploader.com/view/771910
http://www.truploader.com/view/463395
http://www.truploader.com/view/552929 (Not finished, gonna start something new)


More soon ;D, please tell me what i can do better :)

Tidus
03-23-2009, 08:51 AM
For the first, it's way too slow, and the movements are really unclear. The second is pretty ok, but I doubt you walk like that. Realism is one of the keys to good animations. Don't overdo the realism though, but enough to still keep it creative. The third missed the impact. Try anticipating the force behind the kick to get it to show impact. It stopped in mid-air, so it didn't seem like he actually finished the kick. And for the fourth, why did you post it?
Hope to see you improve quickly :].

allyman8
03-23-2009, 08:56 AM
Thanks for dropping the comment tidius.

Will be sure to work on it! :D

Kieran.
03-23-2009, 02:08 PM
well, you need to have straight lines for the different parts of the body, not just a bend for a leg, it looks more wobbly that way, also speed it up.

Keep trying.

allyman8
03-23-2009, 09:07 PM
Thanks for the post KD.

Will work on it ;]

live2wrestle
03-23-2009, 09:15 PM
the second isnt too bad.
in the third one you need more power behind the kick.
the last one doesnt really have anything to comment on.
Just keep working at it and you will get better.
Good Luck

poppetje3D
03-24-2009, 07:24 AM
They have no heads?
I don't get it some animators don't use a head!
Without a head u die! :S

MaxZ
03-24-2009, 07:54 AM
We add them later, we're too lazy to draw 'em every frame.

allyman8
03-24-2009, 10:55 AM
Well, actually i wasn't planing on adding a head.

Headless looks pretty cool, in my opinion.