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salomdi
03-26-2009, 03:16 PM
http://nikuna.deviantart.com/art/pp-roll-p-combo-117193866

i know he runs a bit spazticly but its better than my last imo

Kieran.
03-27-2009, 02:53 AM
well...

Your improving a lot!

The feet shouldn't be so big, so you'll need to draw them smaller, and you need more anticipation on the punches, and more easing...

KEEP IT UP!

salomdi
03-27-2009, 04:54 AM
ty for the criticisum!

MaxZ
03-27-2009, 06:24 AM
The feet are WAY too big.

doc
03-27-2009, 09:59 PM
ooooh man i wish people that posted on DA would put a play button in... (not you in particular). Or maybe its just my cpu that always opens it in a small screen.

but it was pretty smooth, but the movements were a bit off. Maybe try line animating instead of brush. But it is a lot better than ur last one.