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allyman8
03-28-2009, 05:47 PM
Just finished this sniper rifle, took me about an hour +.

Don't criticize the animation or the muzzle flash, i didn't put any effort into it :Smile:

Here it is: http://www.truploader.com/view/774387

Original photograph: http://media.photobucket.com/image/Sniper%20rifle/inxsone/SW%20Stuff/LightRepeatingSniperRifleDone01.jpg

Criticism on the gun itself please :) :Cool:

FoShizzle
03-28-2009, 08:52 PM
You need more detail on the scope, and the end of the barrel is too big.

Scarecrow
03-28-2009, 09:13 PM
don't use gradients, they always look terrible :(

allyman8
03-28-2009, 09:20 PM
You need more detail on the scope, and the end of the barrel is too big.

Well, you don't really have to worry about detail, because once you shrink down the weapon (To be held by a stickman) you cant really notice the detail, but i respect your post :D.

@ Scarecrow : Gradient hater :Nooooooo:

Covalence
03-28-2009, 09:51 PM
Is that a toy?

allyman8
03-28-2009, 11:41 PM
Is that a toy?

If you want it to be.

Covalence
03-29-2009, 12:35 AM
What?
In reference picture you used, is the "sniper rifle" you a toy? jackass

allyman8
03-29-2009, 01:23 AM
What?
In reference picture you used, is the "sniper rifle" you a toy? jackass

Don't think so, im not too sure, but never seen a toy gun, that detailed, and such, maybe so.

poppetje3D
03-29-2009, 05:09 AM
the colors look terrible :S

.Aklemo.
03-29-2009, 05:30 AM
don't use gradients, they always look terrible :(

I disagree, gradients look good only if used the right way.

And Allyman, the gun was obviously made with less effort, there isn't much detail, it lacks average detail actually. You need to draw lines for everything you see on the picture, I'll explain what I mean on MSN.

allyman8
03-29-2009, 09:36 AM
I disagree, gradients look good only if used the right way.

And Allyman, the gun was obviously made with less effort, there isn't much detail, it lacks average detail actually. You need to draw lines for everything you see on the picture, I'll explain what I mean on MSN.

I understand what you're saying, but, once you make it small, you can't really see the detail, unless im doing a scene where i will be zooming in on the gun, i don't see the point, but thanks for the post. ;D

doc
03-30-2009, 01:00 PM
the colors were odd. i honestly didn't like the original gun that you used.

New Generation
03-30-2009, 01:06 PM
The end of the sniper rifle looks kind of weird, change the colour and reduce the width. The sound effect is very poor quality. Go to File>Publish Settings>Flash>Audio Stream & Audio Event> Bitrate= 80kbpsis enough.

allyman8
03-30-2009, 04:34 PM
The end of the sniper rifle looks kind of weird, change the colour and reduce the width. The sound effect is very poor quality. Go to File>Publish Settings>Flash>Audio Stream & Audio Event> Bitrate= 80kbpsis enough.

Thanks a lot :)