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ellwilllanimator
03-29-2009, 11:35 AM
http://www.truploader.com/view/298498
im a begginer so comments are wholy apprectiated.
please tell me how i could improve dont just post:
' eease it bettr' or 'resizing' put a lil detail into it .
thanks.

Kieran.
03-29-2009, 11:54 AM
what was it an entry for?

anyway, the head is too big for the stick, and it did all it's moves way to fast without any definition, which can be improved by easing..

keep trying

reqtor
03-29-2009, 12:06 PM
i think the entry was for run in wall collab

live2wrestle
03-29-2009, 12:16 PM
yeah i think it was probably for the run in wall collab.
Kd is right the head is a little big for the body