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Etch
03-30-2009, 01:35 AM
http://i-sneeze-colors.deviantart.com/art/Oh-So-Sharp-117556297


Rate here please.
http://www.fluidanims.com/view.php?id=331


:D

Cosmonaut
03-30-2009, 02:18 AM
Sweeeeeeeeeet dude, I loved the movements very cartoony with just the right amount of slop. Kinda reminded me of like the old cartoons, don't ask how.

Anywho when the blade entered his head it looked forced, like I can see a little skip where you should have added a frame and put a wee bit more moving about it. The fall looked kinda lame also, didn't fit the style imo. Maybe a bit more dramatic in the limbs, like more ragdolly like. But eh whateva, do what you want and have fun yo. And now to never return to the flash section of spp ever ever again. :D

Etch
03-30-2009, 02:32 AM
Well thanks man.

:D

Kieran.
03-30-2009, 09:41 AM
Very well eased and very un-wobbly, also great blood

GOOD JOB!

doc
03-30-2009, 12:38 PM
that was great!
good easing and stuff, good blade trail, and good movements. oh, and the blood was good too.

Etch
03-30-2009, 01:24 PM
Thanks !

Tawnik
03-30-2009, 01:36 PM
Sounds dont fit, but the animation is good, fluid and the easing is good, I'd prefer better movements next time =)

Shanto
03-30-2009, 01:57 PM
That was AWESOME.

Really good.

Etch
03-30-2009, 03:19 PM
Thanks Tawnik and Shanto.
:D

Omega
03-30-2009, 03:20 PM
Very nice and cartoony.
Smooth movements, with moderate complexity.
Easing was also good and moderate.

I especially love the sword trails. Nice job.

Sunder Forge
03-30-2009, 03:25 PM
Give the man a shield:

Blood looked rushed, and when zoomed in, it looked danmed rushed.
Danm man, if that sword was replaced by any weapon, it'd look the same...not sure if that is good or bad, but it means something. Liked the stick's movements, but I guess you gotta thank the zoomed out approach for that a bit. He moved like spaghetti.


NOW GIVE HIM A ****ING SHIELD!

Etch
03-30-2009, 03:44 PM
Lololol. I'll do some more sword shorts and try getting them right.

RATE HERE PLOX
http://www.fluidanims.com/view.php?id=331